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aka Lauren Z
is a 27.80 year old
and has been a part of the Threadless community for 5 years, 8 months!
has scored 31 submissions, giving an average score of 2.42, helping 0 designs get printed.
that is so great!
posted 5 years, 8 months ago in Adorable Disaster 2
one criticism i just realized i had:
the face sort of bothers me a little bit. can you make it look a little less precise? i realize you need to distinguish it more from the rest of the cookie, but the eyebrows and frown in particular just look a little too perfect to go with the rest of the design.
posted 5 years, 8 months ago in Delete All Cookies...
i like that you removed the text--that and the fact that the eyes are fixed on the cursor really highlight the cursor as the main focus of the design. also, the glass of milk is really funny and cute.
oh, i didn't think of the crumbs as being from another cookie that had already been deleted.
would you be able to put the crumbs around the base of the recycling bin?
also, would it make sense to say "delete remaining cookies"? i realize you're using technical jargon and all, but if you're trying to convey that another cookie has already been deleted then it seems like you need a little something extra. maybe putting the crumbs around the recycling bin would help; i don't know.
i think it looks much better now that you changed the font and added the cursor. i'm not sure what problems people have with the face, but i think it looks good.