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aka Jeni Meekma
and has been a part of the Threadless community for 4 months, 1 week!
has scored 330 submissions, giving an average score of 3.17, helping 9 designs get printed.
I think I see what you're going for. Solidify your concept and simplify the design. As for the scene spelling out "escape", that is not working. I see "from reality" first, and only realized the "escape" part due to the "C" and "E" above it, which looks like it spells "cue". A rule of thumb when using text in a design like this is keep it uniform. Rework "escape" so it looks like the "from reality".
However, if you have a strong concept, you won't need text in the design.
Also, it's a very "loud" design. There is so much going on it's hard to tell where you want us to look.
I would say start with the phrase "escape from reality" and try a different angle. Hope it helps.
posted 2 months, 2 weeks ago in Need advice and help!
Thank you for the suggestions. Hopefully it will available to vote on soon.
posted 4 months, 1 week ago in WIP-"Showdown" Looking for critques/suggestions