Hi, i need help with this WIP, anyone?

*ORIGINALLY


Hi, this is JINX.



How does it feel to you guys? Too dumb?

Watch this
digsy
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I like the concept but the cat could need more work. I say "could" as I'm looking at this on my iPhone and it tends to make things really dark but at the moment it's just a black blob in a cat shape. Apologies if that's just me!

otrom
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Okiedokie! <3

otrom
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<3

taz-pie

Hello ecsu! *waves

otrom
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hi taz! (:

otrom
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i won't mind the crazy, how 'bout now?

soloyo
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needs a rabbit foot

blackhand_
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Definitely needs more contrast, but it's looking good.

BlancaJP
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:) going also with more contrast and the eye patch. It took me a while to get, the string doesn't look like it's connected to the patch and the red line is trowing me of. I think it's a fun idea and looking pretty good :)

Ferz

awesome...wouldn't want to change anything except more contrast-..to show the grays little more...love it

otrom
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how is it now?

TheInfamousBaka
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It's a lot easier to see the eye patch now. :-)

TheInfamousBaka
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And I just noticed the skull in the cat's eye. That's an really neat detail!

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TheInfamousBaka said:

And I just noticed the skull in the cat's eye. That's an really neat detail!

Oh wow....was hard to see that on my screen for some reason...that's awesome!

otrom
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I think the prob is with my monitor. Mostly because it made no huge difference whatsoever to me, but for you guys it made all of it.

macdoodle
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This is so cool!

otrom
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this is way far from my actual work or what i want from it. but a i'm trying to make something quirky enough, that i have fun with it and still be threadless material.

help me win. ):

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ohio

adanawtn

I think that if you made the outline of the cat a little lighter to delineate it from the color of the background/shirt, it would pop more. Also, the red on the eye patch could be done away with. The mirror shards that NOTank suggested would be great around the front paws. I don't really understand why the halo is there, but maybe it's just me. Other than that, I think it's a great concept. Can't wait to see the finished product.

littlem
adanawtn said:

I think that if you made the outline of the cat a little lighter to delineate it from the color of the background/shirt, it would pop more. Also, the red on the eye patch could be done away with. The mirror shards that NOTank suggested would be great around the front paws. I don't really understand why the halo is there, but maybe it's just me. Other than that, I think it's a great concept. Can't wait to see the finished product.

yeah, can you make some highlights aroung the hind leg area? you know what i mean? i dunno, i feel like it would pop more even without making the rest of the highlights brighter

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