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First design = )

Hello :D
I would like some feedback on my first design here please. Threadless says it needs more work. =/
Any ideas?
Thanks so much!


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taz-pie

oh my

taz-pie

did you draw that train? i think not.

your lettering is ugly as hell, mang.

what's with the diarhhea splatters?

what is your concept here?

Erinmk

Take out the type or make it part of the design. Also, make the train your own. It looks as though it was pulled out of a photograph with not much done to it. Think of your concept and keep going towards it.

johnnysPeter

lol diarrhea splatters... Yeah work with it more as Erinmk said "make it your own". Add color, texture, shadows/shading, depth, play with the placement and sizing and other colored shirts, give it a feeling and some concept. Your art whether it's good or not is supposed to have a reason or meaning with feeling, not so plain and generic.

Morkki
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I'm just going to assume this is a troll. It makes everything easier.

Morkki
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But I would add Shaq's head on the train. That would really make it pop.

taz-pie

ALL ABOARD THE ZANE TRAIN

Adilanam

Just a tip, be careful when outlining an image entirely in words, I don't usually think it works.

Lara LRL

Thanks for the constructive criticism guys. I will work on it. :)

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