Please critique-Gargoylegirl

this is my rough sketch. pls critique.

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as far as sketch goes, it looks pretty darn good. i dunno how your rendering will be yet, so i can't comment on that.

i just think it is too big on the shirt. and i'm kinda missing the idea here... maybe you should make her a whole bodied gargoyle or something? right now as a "bust" like thing it just makes her look like a chess piece.


The box part of it kind of threw me off (first thought was kleenex box for some reason) and is kind of confusing to the design. Otherwise, the sketch itself is good, just lacking conceptual clarity.


yea, you guys are right. I'll discard this design keep on to work on conceptual. ty

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