Please critique my design!

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Yay! I realy like the idea and the implementation. Not sure about the moon flying around there, but also it has some style.


Do you have any idea to make it better? Maybe if the city was more realistic... (Sorry for my english :)

And thanks!

Aji ontowiryo

i don't think my advice would do, but i think you don't need the moon. if i were you, i'll consider the red guy hold a dish cover on his right hand, so it will keep the balance of your artwork more. those character are very good, and you got the style too. are you a children's book illustrator?

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