Suggestions on how to place the picture

I wanted to do this as an art project but actually draw it and paint it, but then I never got around to doing it.

I'm having trouble with its placement and there something that feels a bit off with it

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Sam MacGregor

As the design stands right now, I don't think it is a strong concept. I would suggest either changing the perspective on it and do kinda fly over view. Extrude the walls and have the pac-man monster eating their way out. OR If you want to continue with the tearing out of the page idea, I would suggest using an arcade version of the game as the background, then have the characters breaking out of the glass and the players running for their lives. I think the idea could have potential, its just the execution right now doesn't work. Hope this helps.

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