HELP! What can I do to make my design better? It got declined.

Any ideas on how I can make my design better? I got declined the first time.
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If I'm you're after some brutal honesty, I just don't think its very clever as far as puns go.

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text based shirts don't go over too well here. with that being said, they have already printed designs that follow the "i heart ____" cliche.

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