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Newbie please help me out...Thanks


What can I do to make the image better? How's the idea?


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evyc

Clean up the white around the edges. It looks really messy right now. Also it looks unfinished, The bunny and carrot need more details. It's a cute idea, your execution is just too messy right now. Pull it into a program like Photoshop or Illustrator and redraw/trace it. If you don't own those programs, consider a collaboration with an artist who does, who can take your design and make it better.

Ryder
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yeah that red ruining this design haha. give it a white background at least... or make white snowy hills and a light blue sky or something... and maybe make the carrot actually pointy like a carrot... right now it looks a little like an adult toy.

littlem

i think it needs fluffier white, actually. like snow. and trees

tarka

idea is ok, but it needs more work

stevied070

Needs work dude, try Inkscape if you dont have the cash for Illustrator http://inkscape.org/ . Using a vector package will really help the quality and overall look of the illustration. Also consider using adobe Kuler https://kuler.adobe.com/#themes/rating?time=30 . Kuler is great for getting your colour palettes just right, If you dont know a bunch about colour, Kuler is a must. Concept is ok, it just needs kind of an edge, like something clever or some humour. Keep us posted on how it goes :-)

t0osilly4u

Thanks for the comments. I'll try to work on it a little more.

t0osilly4u

Thanks for the comments. I'll try to work on it a little more.

t0osilly4u

Thanks for the comments. I'll try to work on it a little more.

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