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Critique on my new design please UPDATED AGAIN

Hey guys, I'm trying to get a first design printed here, and I would really love some honest feedback. For my design I've gone for something kind of cute, with the little guy saying "I mustache you a question".

I cant seem to get the image to show on the forum the link is here if you cant see it

I have added in tiny strokes to his body to try and make that textured vector look. Tell me what you think, any suggestions that can make it "pop" a little more would be great.

And now with a different body color as suggested. I feel like I may prefere the new design. But its not quite finished. Which body shape is best?

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Hah! Love it. Really cute, really simple. Strangely stylistic too!

I'm really not sure what to suggest! I don't think you'd want to add too much more, as obviously it would derive from the style you're aiming for. Maybe just tidy up some of those edges?

Really like it. :]

sweet n sour
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click on the little camera icon enter the image's address and bingo.


Cool design! Very simple, but nice.

sweet n sour
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the I mustache you a question bit is really unoriginal and lame I would ditch it and give the little guy a world to inhabit and maybe some friends.


Thanks for the feedback guys, it's been helpful. Thanks for the help with the embedding sweet n sour, may I ask which service you used to host the image, the two I tried don't seem to be working for it. I really liked the idea you had about creating a little world for him, I have been toying with it myself. But I still do like the "mustache you a question" idea, and I feel that if it is don't right it can be quite nice, as I have received some pretty good feedback about it.

Thanks for the comment jonathan43 & teedubbleyoo, I have worked on tidying up the edges and I agree that it looks much better. I'm still trying to refine my personal style, so there are still lots of mistakes to be made :-).


I like it! If anything, you could make the characters mustache bigger so its a little more obvious, and we see it right away. The only thing that I am wondering is the yellow supposed to be a body of a bean or something? If its just the body for a character, I would suggest a more neutral color.



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Honestly this phrase is so over used. If you really want to persist with it then I'd at least introduce a second character that hes asking a question of, this needs some sort of interaction or scene.


Agreed, Wharton. I like the idea, but maybe it is a little over used. Ill try and introduce some interaction to it.


I like the idea of a huge curly mustache, like Lorax style....


I love the little blue guy much better. I also like ashtrashbigash's idea about a big mustache like the Lorax. Cute and lovable.

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