Critique on my new design please UPDATED AGAIN
Hey guys, I'm trying to get a first design printed here, and I would really love some honest feedback. For my design I've gone for something kind of cute, with the little guy saying "I mustache you a question".
I cant seem to get the image to show on the forum the link is here if you cant see it
I have added in tiny strokes to his body to try and make that textured vector look. Tell me what you think, any suggestions that can make it "pop" a little more would be great.
And now with a different body color as suggested. I feel like I may prefere the new design. But its not quite finished. Which body shape is best?