this desing was not accepted for scoring help please!

hi, i wanted to submit this design for scoring but it was not accepted i would love to have opinions and advices i am a new designer in the site and well i need tons of help, i will be really thankfull for that. :)

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You need to host your image in a server if you want it to show up here, you can't add the file itself. There are lots of places to do this, like for example.

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