Quantum bees - comments for a noob

Hi guys,


i'd like to have some comment and advice for my first attempt of submission. The design represents quantum bees interacting with a honeycomb structure made of carbon atoms, which is nothing less than graphene!!


Maybe the concept is not so catchy and some scientific background is needed to understand the design immediatly...but graphene is great (is just one atom thick!), bees are great (they produce a lot of honey for us!) so i think this could be a good combo!


Thank you!




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NOTBlowingSmoke

the illustration is very cute, i love those little bees, and the concept is obviously very well thought out, however as i am not a science buff, i don't understand it. i don't doubt that it makes sense, but it goes over my head, and i'm afraid it will probably do the same for most others.

maybe try again with a concept that's easier for the layman to understand.

mastahkillah

Thx, I added a couple of lines that should help getting the meaning of the picture. I wanted to give a "physics lesson drawing" look to my desing...let's see what happens with the submission in the next days! VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE :)

octootco

This is cute! I like the graphic style a lot. But I don't like the cut and paste look of the bees. Maybe give each once a slightly different look and personality, that way I can pick a favorite one and connect to the design a little deeper :)

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