Asking for Critique -- Mad Men shirt

Hey all, this is my first submission, but please be brutal if it's deserved.

It's a reference to the Season 1 Finale of Mad Men, specifically the ad pitch at the end:

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Seen the episode, and I love the idea. I feel the image needs some context to it, as in place it on a backdrop of a t-shirt, or another piece of collateral that threadless prints on. The design itself, feels sparse, maybe if you pushed the text down further, maybe twice as far down as it is now. Clean up the image a bit, if it's a time machine, I'd want to see the past look cleaner and less muddied up. Possibly even simplify the image as it too can be an allusion to simpler times.

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