Critique on a new design (thanks in advance!)

Would like some feedback on a design. I'm still unsure as to whether I should submit this one, improve it, or just move on.

Any suggestions/comments are much appreciated!

Watch this

wow this is adorable! its really funny!


Thanks! I was thinking I could submit this for the WWF challenge

funny & nicely illustrated


Sorry about that! Not sure what happened.


Agree that it is a clever and funny concept. But not sure going for the text is a good choice. Also could refine the artwork a bit. The fog out of the freezer is kind of weird. Like i said fine tuning the artwork would take this to the next level.

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