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My first version. Started as a design for a lipstick ad and added my own twist. Critique away!
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from the nose till right before the lip.. slant it a bit? try it on diff color shirts too?? maybe white or black.. or something creamy ?
could you critique on mine as well ? 2 diff, versions.. let me know which one you like better?:
Thx ! :)
maybe if you changed the t-shirt color would be more wonderful !
Please rate my new design :
V2. took advice of angling the upper lip lines. and trying out light yellow shirt.
Looks great. Gives you a chill when looking at it.
Would you critique mine if you have time? http://www.threadless.com/critique/108984/Skull
this color looks a lot better !! a lot lighter on the eyes :) , that slant makes it better too .. it gives me an impression of someone a little deformed yes, but not too much... (enough :) :P)
i uploaded a few new colors :) could you check it out please? :
Thx ! :)
just a suggestion, those hands look off somehow.. the angling i think is somewhat off.. the finger on the top.. it goes into the shirt, where as the second finger from the top come out of the shirt, and that knuckle?? that really point out of the shirt? .. try that? amm i hope i was clear ! :)
Sam.mk1: I see what you are saying. I think if i fix the middle finger knuckle it should help. that finger looks flat where it should be twisted abit. I used a photo reference but I think if i add some more shadow it will give a more "turned" look. Thanks!
yea shadows should work to an extent :) but from what i see the finger on the top is the largest finger.. and you will have to make the second finger from the top larger than the first one :)... try it out with shadows, if it works that would be so much better !!!
This version I fixed the knuckles and I changed up the lipstick to a heart. Had that idea so thought Id throw it out there. Let me know what you all think.
you could give the text as a blood splatter mixed with those other spllaters?
could you please click on submit, if you liek it ? :
Thxs a lot !
Im not sure I'm getting the idea behind this one. Is there anything else you could add to make it more clear. Im seeing people saying add the text but Im thinking you could do it graphically and not have to add text.
The illustration work is strong, but I agree that I'm not clear on the design's message..
Who is your anticipated audience for the shirt? Just something to consider..
If you have a moment, I'd so appreciate a vote. Thank you!
Eat, drink, and be merry...
This is very strong...
Please help to vote my.
No one is perfect
i think that the upper lip is protruding too...
Also I thing it's complicate too. I like more clean.
Please, critique my tee, i appreciate it!
I decided to go back to V2. I took away the heart as the lip stick. No one seemed to get the idea. This one is more straight to the point.
Yep it's the coolest version, submit this i think it's perfect!
yeah I like this latest version best :] looks ready to me
I would get rid of the white. Fill in the white on the lips with black.
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I like it but the middle finger seems a lil odd at the knuckle. almost looks 2d there. other than that its awesome!
I like it, id say submit.
Definitely like this version the best. Great work!!I I also think it looks great on a blue shirt. I love the detail on the dripping lipstick and the splatter on the bottom. Well done. Keep me posted on when your design is up for scoring. Good luck!!
p.s My design is up for scoring!! If you have a moment please score my design, "earth's bight idea". I would really appreciate it. After you're done scoring feel free to leave a comment on the submission page if you like. Thank you so much.
the anatomy of the nose is a little off. If you move it to the left and up a tiny bit I think it would really help. Great design though!
This works better for me on the blue shirt
looks great but I do agree with emilyzeadesigns. may just remove the nose.
When you have a moment, please rate my designs.
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The nose and lips just look so darn wide.
Very cool though.