Dates

  • by patticus
  • posted Sep 11, 2012
  • 14 Comments

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patticus

Dates. On a date. Printed on a white T

SlyPigDesigns

Awesome idea. The only thing I would do is extend the corner lines and lose the border. Maybe work on the faces a little bit. With some work I would wear it. Keep Goin!

patticus

Yeah.. I was worried about the corner lines.. because it looks awkward without the border. but the faces I definitely wanted to polish up a bit! thanks for the input!

patticus

Third version. be sure to check old versions for reference and to see if changes are good or not! merci beaucoup!

SlyPigDesigns

Yeah without the border the lines look a little odd. Everything else looks fantastic. I would wear it.

AdamGEmerson

The chairs a floating above the floor/wall line in this version.

Sam.mk1

the wall line looks as if he bottle is hanging from it.. maybe you could lpay with that idea? hmm i love this one though!! just move the lines a bit so it dosent look as if the bottle hangs from it.. or just take the lines out all together? ..could you please critique on mine too ? heres the link : http://www.threadless.com/critique/108354/Morph

thank you :)

patticus

The third version. thank you for all the help. please look at old versions to compare! merci beaucoup

SlyPigDesigns

I would wear the hell outta that shirt!

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