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Time Ticks Me Off

  • by mitchellp
  • posted Aug 04, 2012
  • 9 Comments

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mitchellp
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This is a collab for the slogan wars 4 contest

mitchellp
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I made a few changes. I made the text more 3-d and made the arm end less abruptly

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Fixed the highlight on the right bell.

Brightwood
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Ha...I didn't realize someone actually used this. (see page 2 on comments)

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how about switch to the hands of the clock messing with the being.

Thomas Orrow

I think I would recommend using a red/orange tee to show the anger. I'm not really convinced about the text, I'd love to see a scrawly hand written look (a mistake I made on my slogan design for nintechno). Also, instead of a hand smashing the alarm, how about an angry clock shouting. Like a little angry alarm clock (same clock as before, but without the damage/hand and w/ a face). OK, that's my advice. Take it or leave it, I know noting about getting printed as I have 0 prints. Good luck with this, I hope it didn't sound too harsh. :)

Thomas Orrow

Also, I think it's a decent slogan-so lots of potential there.

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