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looks cool but I think the guitar should be centered. If you have a moment would you please critique my design? Thanks!
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I've centered the guitar as suggested, what do you think?
I like it a lot! Have you tried playing around with different colors? Like putting the tree in brown on the military green tee or maybe even a semi-transparent purple on the Bordeaux tee?
And if you have a moment, feel free to critique mine: http://www.threadless.com/critique/106725/Road_Crossing_Trends. thanks!
I think this is a beautiful design. Right now the only thing I struggle with is its placement on the shirt. It's not quite a central shirt design, and it's not quite an all-over design. It looks like it really wants to be an all over design, but the neck gets in the way and the tree just ends rather unnaturally there. I would love to see the tippy top of the design embrace the shirt shape more, or to have the design made a little smaller so the top of the tree doesn't look cut off by the neck hole.
I agree with silverhare, the branches can extend a lot wider (particularly on the left side, to make both sides even) or make it smaller so the top is not cut off by the neck. Either way works. Personally, I think the branches should extend, It's a spectacular design.
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oh wow this is really good. i would buy this if made into a tee. i dunno what i would change. the comments above make sense but initially for me this is already really good.
Please help me out with my design submission
I have expanded the branches not to have that weird effect on the neck side, what's your opinion?
I love it! I think you're ready to submit!
It's ready! :D
It think it looks a little squashed in this version. At least with the instrument.
If you have a moment, please check out my design currently up for voting.
I think it looks good but why the bend on the neck. That keeps it from flowing as well as it would without it.
I think if you remove or work more on the guitar it's be better. but love your job.
I agree, if I didn't read the title I'm not sure if i would know its a tree...keep up the good work though...
Love the idea! I agree about working on the guitar, however... maybe giving it a bit of detail in the lower half?
I agree with some of the above comments that, enlarged like this, it loses some of its tree-ness. This is likely an annoying suggestion, but you might try leaving it at a smaller size to let the tree-ness shine, and extending some of the tendrily branches at the ends to take care of the shoulder thing.
I am not sure how I feel about adding detail to the guitar. Maybe very minimal suggestions of details.
I like how it wrap around the arms. The placement is good. I would just make the guitar at the bottom thinner.
Thanks for the feedback.
wow this looks a lot better. i would say submit right away
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As some people already said I think you should make the guitar thinner and maybe the neck longer, and make the tree follow directly on it without the bend. Personally I like the size of the tree in v2 better, if you would make the right side a bit smaller so it has the same shape as the left side
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top half is so awesome
the bottom half looks very simple that do not support the supper nice work on the top
i would say to change instrument
use an harp for example or an instrument that is not so common as the guitar