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I designed this for the Simple Design Challenge. It was declined. I'm unsure why. I'm putting it here for critiques / suggestions / etc. rnrnI'm fairly settled on the colors and overall design. I will accept all critiques but I am specifically looking for opinions on placement, size, and textures.
Actually any suggestions are welcome!
Try to change colours between to charachter. Like blue - purple
I think it's great! It's really simple yet still very readable. It's a simple idea with a simple execution. Did they say what about it failed to meet the competition's criteria?
Maybe change the placement on the shirt, but the design is solid.
I agree with @Rocky Deputy, the design is awesome! But I think it would look nicer if it was smaller (not so in your face) and the placement maybe where the heart is.
If you have a moment could you please critique my design? :)
I think that it's great. It's simple and imaginative. The best variant is on the left girl. I don't know why they've declined it, but I like it.
If you have a minute :-) Moravian Inspiration
How about the placement over the heart?
I think maybe it's just placement - the design is really good. I would suggest slightly smaller, I like it central on the tshirt best.
I'm really really stuck on mine, so if anyone has time I would appreciate any advice :-)
Out of My Hair
Oh I just commented on the last version, I love the new smaller ones!
i like the new placement. and the design is wicked. maybe make the heart stronger by trying closer colours like ahmetuyar suggested. blue - purple. or even pink - red?
I think it's gotten too small, though I think it would look good embroidered small on a collared shirt.
Too smal but Sweet 5 if you have a second I really appreciate it!
Thanks for all the feedback! I've made the colors bolder, now its pure magenta, cyan, and purple.
I've updated the placements. Maybe smaller was too small?
Now with a girl's color way and a boy's. How about the colors, size, and placement on this one?
Love this one, no feedback so far is great.
Please check mine if you can :)
I like this versions the best. for size and colors. I like the red with pink bubble a lot. I would want those colors but guys cut. Something about the hair being just a little too "blocky" bothers me, personally, but no one else has mentioned that.
Great improvement! :) I really like both the girls and boys colorway, if you look at it long enough, it also looks like a boy and girl kissing! (kind of, maybe it's just me..)
As @pearlaceoushecticity mentioned, maybe it would be nice to add some curvature to the lower back side of the girls hair.
If you have a moment, would you critique the new version of my design? :) Bare Essentials
I'd still like to see an embroidered polo shirt version.
The pink bubbelgum red one works best cause they make it look more heartlike opposed to the other one, maybe try n add a highlight on the bubbelgum?
looks good otherwise
check out mine
sorry forgot how to do it ;) been a while
I wish you would have submitted this to Threadless Loves Simple! This is an awesome idea and use of negative space, etc.
Thanks @Admbms! I did submit it to Threadless Loves Simple. It was declined...
I mean Admbrns, thanks again.
Simple, easy, great!
If you have time please help me.Thank you ;)
This is extremely adorable. You should definitely submit this! :)
If you have time:
The Evil Queen with "Apple: The Wickedest of Jobs"
Awesome use of ambiguity. I agree with one of the above statements, you shoudl submit this in threadless loves simple. :)
It's perfect as is! So clean and brilliantly simple! It's really more of a personal thing, but I'd say that the bubble on the boy version is just a tad purple-y, and maybe it'd help if it was more of the straight pink like the girl version. BUT, like I said, that's extremely minor, and I think it looks great anyway-- placement, colors, design, craftsmanship. Nicely done! :)