Arrow to the heart

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I used to be in love, but then I took an arrow to the heart.


I love the expression. If you want to keep it at 4 colors its pretty good. But I would add a different hue for the tongue and a secondary tone for dimension on the heart. Also a minor "CSI" critique would be to show the flesh exiting the back and puckering in the front. Otherwise this is a strong concept from the start. Any changes should come from the heart (pun intended) :)


Yeah, I think this is a situation that would really benefit from a halftone. Like Travegan said, you should give a darker color to the tongue, and then use that color as a halftone. :)


Try to make the bommotm end of the heart shoter. And IMHO the red color is too bright.

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