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Hey all! This is one I have been wanting to do for a while (since I had the idea for the Tardis tee. It's the same style and idea as this one, but more doctor who oriented. rnrnThis is a white tee with two colors: black and red. anyhow, please rate and comment (on both designs), I'd love to know what you think!rnrn
Very cool. You could make a whole collection of geek tees all in your own style. Love it!
Pretty cool design, love the grungy outline thing! The only remark I'd do is to add shades to your design so it won't look flat! Otherwise, it's good to be send for scoring :)
Nice work :)
I'd appreciate if you could give me feedback on my design :)
Cool design! What about another tee colour?
Nice placing. good and simple. perhaps some shadoes highlights? but otherwise looks good.
really like the drawing style :)
Maybe the left wings' lines should be thicker :)
I am fascinated by the design and my son star's fan wars ... I do not even say to you!
dear friend... ... Let me know if you give me a hand to spread my design, thanks
Cool drawing style! Love the little touch of putting vader's helment on the dudes head! Care to check out my star wars design:) http://www.threadless.com/critique/101896/The_Dark_Side
I realy like this consept, cool
very nice! what would you think about a smaller design? great work, I like very much the color combination and the handmade outline!
If you have time, please take a look on the last version of my design.
Thanks for your critique! This looks great, the doodle style is amazing. I'd like to see how it looks scaled down a bit on the tee.
I've submitted a 2nd version: which way?
I really like this design. And I think it works very well at this scale.
cool design. As said before, maybe add a couple of shading lines to bring it out a little more. love the placement and darth vader model!
I'd say maybe.... but maybe just a little more detail.... and I think that you should take really good look at the ellipsis in the trubines because that is the main area where your perspective can make the drawin win or fail (I would clean a little bit the top left one)
Please help me with some feedback:
I'd do it a tad smaller, just so you can really see the wings!
Contrary to what some of them where saying, I actually like the flat look on this one. I love the simple look. Can you please check this out again before I submit it today?
This i mean: Can you please check this out again before I submit it today?
Great idea, but I personally don't like the way it just cuts off at the sleeves. Maybe move it down a little so it doesn't do it? And a little droid detail wouldn't hurt either. Great start!
Please, if you have a moment I have a submission up for scoring and could really use a vote and a comment â€“ thank you.
Here's the new version! I added a few lines to make the shape a little easier to see - and I fiddled around with some shading, but it's just not the right style. This is supposed to be flat and cartoony, like it's hand drawn. I also included previews for a couple of different colors of shirt, so you can see what it looks like. Let me know what you think of the different colors! (white, silver, and slate are the colors pictured here) Thanks!
It looks great! I love the different colors.
I like your art. I'm not sure if it's going to be enough to stand out in the sea of star wars submissions that get put in, but the quality of the art is good.
Could you vote on my design?
I really like the rough-edge style! The grey tees look best to me. Looks good. Thanks for your comment earlier!
A beautiful concept. If it is up to me i would make it more realistic with defined line work and color. Also you could increase the angle between the x shape and give it more of X shape.
score and comment please
The Last Lions
I'm also thinking of doing a version that is just a little smaller so you can see the left wings a little better. Let me know what you think!
I feel the concept has potential. You should definitely could add more details to it by adding a cosmic background and stuff. As of now it is too simple. This concept calls for details is what i feel.
Submit it, you have my 5point vote
I like it, maybe some effects in the background... space, darkness receeding, nebula style colors, explosions or near misses.. Nice style.
I like the gray one the best I think.
Love the simplistic drawn feel of it. The only critique I can think of for this design would be to change something so the wings dont get cut off but you already thought of that. good work. keep it up
hate to be that guy but check out my design!
nicely done !
this is awesome. don't change a thing! i think i like it best on the light grey, btw.
if you get a chance, i'd love for you to critique my design:
This is really well done the only thing I would look at is the bottom left wing needs another line or something like that. Great work
If you get a chance I'd really appreciate your vote on my designs
I love the additions! They help define the shape without changing the style of the art. And I agree that the light grey is the best color of the three.
I don't think you need to add anything; I love how simplistic it is.
I also would like to see it a bit smaller, as you suggested, so we can see more the the X-Wing's x-wings!
You have a 5$ from me when this is up.
And don't forget, my design is up for voting here!
I'd like maybe a black version also... i think it's pretty cool.
I'd appreciate your comments also... thanks
new version coming soon. comments, please!
Cool!! like it the way it is...
Cant go wrong with an X wingII would have it on the slate shirt
I like the gray one, but I guess I'd wait for the new version to see the changes.
Another StarWars design
pretty cool submit it :)
pretty neat...looking great....if u have time ...check out my design ....
Love the sketchy style. I think you're right to scale it down a bit to get the wing shown better. Have you tried the design on black? I think that would make the design stand out better.
Please - if you have a moment, I would really appreciate your critique on my latest design, thanks: Buttons the Invincible
Yes need to scale down i love the drawing style but fit your design so we can see your great work! Also tough love and slate and SIlver design but either one you pic will do Great!
If you have time plz Crit Mine What are Friends For!
Hey all! thank you all very much for your suggestions. I was not too keen on some of the suggested changes, but I tried them out to see how I liked them. First off I changed the size to be a bit smaller, then it needed something because the design is a bit off balance (semi-intentionally) so I put in the background (quite a process, I must say) and with that detail, shading became completely necessary! so here it is, after much work; a design I can be proud of. I hope you like it! comments, please, suggestions, of course, are also always welcome. While you're at it, please, see rate and comment on my other designs! Pluto: What Really Happened(new version) and Tardis Blue(suggestions, please!)
Appologies, that is the incorrect link to Pluto. Here is the correct one:
Pluto: What Really Happened
OH MY GOSH! I love it!! The blue you added is genius and it looks great!
Much better, Charcoal looks the best :)
AWESOME!!! just submit it this way...
U have my 5!!
cool effect i like the back drop to it. $5!
I love the colors that were added to the background, it makes the ship POP more. Most of all, I really like the hand drawn quality of it. I say submit