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!!!Design in Progress!!! I need opinions!

OK a more complete version of Lemonalle's name inspiration!!!!
lemons or something along those lines


This is my first attempt at illustrator, and a design. Thanks for your feedback!!!

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Omair

LEMMINGS! HAHA!

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yes... quite. not done yet, and not sure how good it'll actually turn out...since I'm still learning illustrator...but I'm glad you got the gist of it...I'ma call it "Identity crisis" or "Lemming Pie"

lemonalle

haha! poor suicidal lemons

lemonalle

the cliff looks pretty cool so far!

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yeah friggin a, I need to restart my computer before I can play with illustrator anymore, it runs sooo slow. plus I got work to do, so...yeah

lemonalle

I have to teach myself how to use my own program at work so I can work on my sub. I'm sure the results will be... interesting to say the most. :)

KaylaFOZB

makes me feel better to know i'm not the only one who's a little clueless. i've been using corel paint shop pro... so, this may be a stupid question, but how does illustrator work compared to other programs?

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Lemonalle you still online?

Roostersauce

hahaha
i actually like that!

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yeah I think I'ma fix the lemon's legs, and the background water...but other than that I think it's fairly finalized

DaddyDom

ummmm...it looks wonderful. I like the shape of your head.

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shape of my head?... haha thanks?

DaddyDom

this design makes my pants tight.

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hahaa......ok I'm off to bed now, I'll fix some more tomorrow... night night!

DaddyDom

EEEEEEEEEVIIIIIILLLLLLL TWWWWWIIIIIINNNNNNN!!!!!

DaddyDom

I'm going to go poo now.

DaddyDom

night night, sweet prince.

DaddyDom

don't fear the truth....don't fear my poo.

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morning bump what do you all think?

sutureself

wow that's kinda neat

lemonalle

haha... I like it!

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DaddyDom on Nov 03 '06 at 2:02am
kind of


hahaha... oh daddy

chelly

not a fan of the title, but as is the design would get a 3 from me

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cool, I'm fixing the design as we speak... any suggestions for names? I'm willing to change it

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I like the concept, and so far it looks pretty good!

The only things I have to say is, I think it is a bit too big as it is. I don't think Threadless can go all the way accross a shirt. You may want to have the cliff where it is, and then stager where the lines end on the other side so it doesn't look so box if it's not accross the whole thing.
Also, some little bumps on the lemons would be nice. And some texture in the grass would be nice too. Maybe a little texture on the rocks too so they don't look so smooth.

All in all, this honestly could look REALLY cool with just a BIT more work. So nice job.

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Update I changed outline color of leaping lemon and of the background water, any other suggestions?

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oh cool thank you jpiatt those are my next edits...

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Ok, another edit...any more suggestions?

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Awww, I hope youre not keeping that big red box on the final sub...its burning my eyes

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no big red box silly... that's just where it would go

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anyone with any additional input?

theurbanraptor

well i like it except for there are too many colors?

theurbanraptor

the rock color
lemon color
shadow color
water color
white
and black?
or is the black the same as the shadow?

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the water is the shirt color, the black is the same as the shadow... so the rock grey, yellow lemon, white, and black

Grey Hunter

what about the green grass?

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ahhh haha , ok, yeah... neither one of us mentioned the grass, thanks there grey!

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Ok Cool, thanks for that obvious pointer there grey. haha. Any other insight?...that'd be great!

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thank you...I think I posted the wrong version there...so it's all blurry...try this one!

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ok...will do, good suggestions guys thanks sooo much for help on my first design!

corykerr

or keep them white and do little lines to make them look grey... i just woke up and can't remember the name of it... but you know, little black lines

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