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anybody here please critique my design..please... =]
I like this a lot but the cloud doesn't really make that much sense. I think you need to have a rainbow in it somewhere.
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I agree with izzryb on the cloud, something seems out of place. ): But I really like it otherwise!
Maybe instead of the cloud have the rainbow arch and have the colors melting off of that
Get some of the white of the shirt mixed in with that cloud to lighten it and have more detail.
Also, I think the rainbow would looking better really dripping out of the cloud, not pouring out like molasses. Good luck with it! Its a nice idea. :D
thanx guys, im in a progress for the 2nd version...
I would suggest to add some noise to eh colors and also work on the cloud to make it go along with the whole design as such. Good luck.
Check this out please.
I think if you had an actual rainbow melting it'd give a better sense of what you're trying to pull off.
Maybe some drips too.
Keep going, im watching this one :) i like the concept
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I think it's just fine coming out of the rainbow. I was actually going to do a design like this. Oh well. :) Great job!
Please critique mine! Thanks!
I'm with the others on the cloud, just doesn't fit in. Try using a arched rainbow and have that melting? Also, maybe make the melting part not so smooth? Add some texture to it
cool idea though
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GUYS! how bout my new version? please say anything =]
Looks pretty nice. But tell me what the message is, I don't really get it.
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I think we should try the reverse: the rainbow top, which falls down from the neck. And the cloud bottom, covered with colors
the messages you can look in many of perspective, depends how it will be thinks in many ways. btw, thanx for the compliment! =]
Thanks for your comments on my design,
About yours, nice Idea, maybe add some details to the cloud. keep it up
Nice design,but it kind of look to me that the rainbow tends to appear behind the cloud.Try to make it come from the cloud,it should make it more real.
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i like the cloud (and new cloud color), but i'd lose the bevel on the cloud in this latest version. i do like the new look of the melting rainbow in this version. i would move the melting rainbow strands off-center (to the left, underneath the larger portion of the cloud?) maybe a few splashes/ raindrops of color at the bottom of the shirt?
if you have a moment, i have a design up for voting, thx! vintage fish
Hey this looks great, could you explain a bit, plus can u give the cloud some detail?
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I like the idea and the colors are very fun! You've made good choices on your revision. I would suggest working with the melting edge of the rainbow a little more. When things melt they tend to bubble and round. The leading edges should be round and smooth. Perhaps you could find a good reference if you Google images of melting wax and candles. You're nearly there, just a few final details. Keep at it!
Please, if you have a moment I have a submission up for scoring and would welcome your vote â€“ thank you.
But why don`t you try to make it look more like a rainbow?
I mean, it can begin not under the cloud , but above it, going up and then gradually rounding up and falling down like an ordinary rainbow. But if you want to keep it vertical I would advise to work a little more on the cloud in order to give it a better texture.
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