Running with the Devil -- UPDATED AGAIN!

UPDATE! 2


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UPDATE!


Rearranged positioning and size, added in streaks, and brought in a 5th color(the black). Any thoughts???



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Any thoughts or gripes before I send this puppy in?


Running with the Devil:



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And oh, it's Van Halen not Van Hagar bro...


http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=V1uz_aDo0YA

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shirtflirt

i love the details and idea but the positioning is a tad confusing to me

i see it as a man running towards the devil vs with the devil...

love that devil!

deepspacemonkey
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thanks man! yeah i was worried it might be a bit confusing...

the devil is supposed to be running backwards, kind of waiting for the dude to catch up

I might have to bring in some "motion" lines, like comic strip style

Manz76

shirtflirt on Feb 29 '12 at 3:15pm i love the details and idea but the positioning is a tad confusing to me

i see it as a man running towards the devil vs with the devil...

I thought the same thing. Your solution of adding some motion lines could solve that easily.

shirtflirt

oooh running backwards! diddn't pick up on that but it's a cool idea

jeffreyg
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neat!

deepspacemonkey
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UPDATED!

Any thoughts on this latest version???

shirtflirt

really like the details...especially the watch

deepspacemonkey
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Nice! Thanks shirtflirt!

is the idea getting across? or at least making a bit more sense?

shirtflirt

much easier to make sense of it imo!

ibyes
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I really like the devil character, but I don't think the runner is of the same style or quality. I know you are pretty far along, but I would explore different ways to draw that character,

Also maybe the runner is a bit too big, making him smaller might make the devil feel more ominous.

Musarter
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I think it looks great. I agree with ibyes that the runner should be smaller but I like his style.

deepspacemonkey
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smaller runner just added, thanks guys!

I think I gotta stick with the style though... THOUGHTS???

shirtflirt

i love how hte devil and the human are two different types of style. if they were the exact same i think the message would get clouded

ibyes
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Are you going to also just do that Satan loves you design, cause that would make a killer tee.

deepspacemonkey
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hahaha!!! I might just have to...

quister
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Great style, love the characters and tee design ;)

shirtflirt

ibyes on Mar 01 '12 at 4:46pm Are you going to also just do that Satan loves you design, cause that would make a killer tee.

WHY NOT!!!

toopersent
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I love this shading technique. How is it done?

deepspacemonkey
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oh man... this is dead in the water... oh well, c'est la vie! I'm going to sub in satan loves you after this has finished scoring poorly. Thanks for the support everyone!

Hey toopersent, it's halftone shading with lines instead of dots

ibyes
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You might want to reconsider how you design the running character Also I think the background could use some work.

Looking forward to seeing "Satan Loves you" up for scoring

shirtflirt

hahah ibyes, not giving it up

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