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ZombieToArt
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Blast off to a taste sensation!rnrnWhy do my designs always seem to be space themed?

ZombieToArt
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Other idea is to take off the crust and have the pizza bit extending to the bottom of the shirt

ZombieToArt
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In the absence of any critique I tried it on a t-shirt but I'm not sure, maybe more pizza, smaller rocket?

kibblex

i thought it was just blasting out a mess of pizza, but looking at V1 i noticed the crust. i prefer the positioning in V2, but i agree with you, smaller rocket and more pizza so you could add the crust.

Beanjuice

Without the crust I lost the pizza concept. Perhaps a "Pizza Planet " as the destination?? All in all you are on your way.

ZombieToArt
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Fairly dramatic change in this version, and changing the name to "Escape from Planet Pizza" (or maybe Planet P1-ZZA or some variation?)

meetcrazydude

sorry to say dude...but the yellow thing ain't looking like a pizza.......its like indian tandoori roti....just make a piza set...whole 6-8 pieces cutted & pull over a rocket in between which dignify the flight.

Critique my design please

ZombieToArt
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I'm pretty happy with the pizza as it is, current thoughts are to add shading to the cheese or add moon and/or stars to better convey the planet idea. Also I looked at it on a different computer and the yellow was a lot brighter, do you guys think I should tone it down?

ZombieToArt
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New version with stars and a moon and adds green pepper to the planet's surface. Mmm, tasty?

Beanjuice

Way better!!!! YUMMMMM Do It!!

Leo Canham
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love the stringy cheese attached to the spaceship.Cant think of any things to change. I think its ready for subbing. Good luck

missessippy

my boys love this one! SUBMIT! critique mine if you would plz! =)

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