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Hi, this is my first submission! I'd appreciate any critiques, thanks! :)
i love it! would it be possible to extend you design so it covers the whole shirt and uses the oversized print method? i think that would add a nice effect :)
if you get a chance: http://www.threadless.com/critique/90592/the_masked_men
A great work, i hope that you will add soon more !
I love this style, it looks cool up close and far away. However, I'd prefer it if it covered more of the shirt or even the whole front. I feel like this has great potential!
please check out my critique:
Thank you for all of your comments :) I agree with your suggestions. I will try extending the design to cover the whole and upload again.
really nice :) i like that it is very tidy :) i agree with above expand it :D
could you critique mine? :)
Hi:) So I've extended it to full front. And change the surfer to an elf and surfboard to a leaf, but I feel that he still needs work. Besides that I'm not sure about the border line around. What do you think?
i really like the colours on this shirt. i don't like the border tho, maybe trying texture or fading it out on the sides so it doesn't look so much like a rectangle? this is cool tho the more i look at it the more i like it, love the leaf surf board too!
critique please :)
I would love it oversized, too, as shoelle does propose. I mean, extended over the t-shirt lines, a bit as if it was a pattern on the textile. Otherwise it's very nice, it is like those 70's skirts or curtains. (Oh, I like less the cap of the figure of the second version!)
oh man, this is greatness! i agree with the faded edges but other than that, i would totally wear this! you've got a 5 from me :)
if you get a chance... http://www.threadless.com/critique/90752/stomp_boom_pow
Why did you change the surfer? He looked fine before. Adding in more lines complicates him, as he's so small all the lines kinda mash together and look messy. I personally don't like the surfer as an elf, but I guess you did it to tie his size to the giant flowers. I think it worked better in version one with a human surfing the flowers because it was more surreal.
Thanks for all the inputs! I appreciate it :) It's still a working progress. It does, look too "boxy", I'll try getting out of it, for a start. Then work on the surfer....still hasn't decided what to do with him.
I really dislike white shirts. But you know what? This design looks FANTASTIC on white! way to go on winning me over.
I like the new placement - it looks great. I am however, a fan of the human instead of the elf, but its a personal choice so go with your gut.
great work though, I love your clean lines!
If you get a chance, check out my submission thats up for scoring!
if you voted on it, I'd be super appreciative - and if you dig it let me know in the comments!
have a great day and keep up the great work!
like your style, it seem s something kinda liberty, dunno...not sure about the tee
yeah, I would try and blend the flowers into the shirt, don't be constrained by the border, there are no boundaries! Maybe think about the background colour. Apart from that, it's a beautiful illustration
I like your style :) Think the chrysanthemums or at least some of them can pop out of the borders. I like that you expended it, but I prefer the previous surfer (probably cos he looks more traditional).
Overall nice! :)
Thank you for your comments :) I appreciate it. I'm now trying to get them out of the box, and see the balance as a whole. Will see about the background colour and I'll upload them as soon as I'm, done!