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They said this needs more work. Any suggestions?
Nice idea...but you need to clear up a bit...the chains look little messy..You can also add some grass below and change the color of the tee in green...
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i'm with bandy. green shirt would be nice. and add some shadows on the poles. :-)
yeah, the simplicity is awesome so you don't have far to go. It looks like it came directly from a scan though. I would re-draw the lines in a using vectors.
Fair is fair. Give mine an honest critique.
Ok thanks for the suggestions, I changed the shirt from blue to green, added grass, and redrew everything so it looks cleaner. Wasn't feeling the shadows anywhere though... What does everyone think?
Good improvements in my view! Well done. Don't know what more I'd do as the simplicity is great.
Definitely looking better now...the word SAD looks too spread out..Can you not work on the font a bit or give some expression...
Please give me your critique..
It's good, but the perspective is a bit confusing...try ti fix that with shading: on the ground and on the swing (swing...is it correct? sorry i'm not english!)
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Thanks guys! I wasn't feelin so hot about the word sad either. I think im going to re-submit it now.
nice work it always makes me laugh when i see those modals i automatically assume its the designer lol
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Haha yeah I don't look like that...
I think it would be nice to get a little dimension on the swing, the flat makes it sort confusing since one is the bottom and one is the top of the swing...
It's a really clever idea :]
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