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Surfin' USSR

  • by Schlo
  • posted Nov 02, 2010
  • 57 Comments

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Schlo

I need YOU !

Schlo

Thanks EdSneek. Cool Ice Breaker !

Schlo

The sleeve should (hopefully) read Surfing USSR in Russian...

DuMone

yesss!!!

Schlo

Does it even make sense to look for other colors? or does it have to be red and yellow?

DuMone

must be on red!!!!

Schlo

OK, OK, let's keep it red. ;) Thanks !!!

Schlo

Any suggestions to make it better?

Schlo

Nobody?

electric_method
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this is hilarious, as far as making it better, the sleeve print might not go over with people initially, so I suggest this:

look up some clipart of waves, or maybe shirts that have water on them, and really study the key elements of what makes the water look good, then just translate that over with some yellow lines so we get the vibe of him on some waves you know? that way the whole surfin ussr jokes comes across real fast.

I dig it tho man, i dig the idea. its all kinds of good and funny.

definitely liking your direction.

oh and check it out bro! my submission is up for scoring as well, so if you dig it, let me know! StarFox 6464

keep up the good work tho man!

Schlo

Thanks! I need to do something with the sleeve.

Schlo

Other advices? Please?

edoran

I don't have any suggestions for the design itself, other than to find someone with native fluency in Russian and double check the sleeve! I like the idea of printing it on the sleeve, but for me it ruins the whole appeal of the shirt if it isn't accurate!

But that might just be my little pet peeve :)

Dudleytrump

I like this design a lot. Maybe try making the inside of the sickle like waves. I agree with the comment above about the waves. See if that looks good.

If you have time, Please kindly rate my design. Not So Funny Now

Schlo

Not sure about that... :(

Schlo

What do you think?

brenrasmussen

Buahaha awesome idea! I really like this a lot actually, One thing I noticed is that the star sort of covers and distracts from the text, try finding a different way to incorporate the star maybe in between the su and rf but much smaller?

if you have time check ou my subbed design and comment if you want :) THANKS!!!! http://www.threadless.com/submission/306820/My_Raging_Pony

EdSneek

Dude i really like it without text. it's too disturbing if you ask me. Anyway, keep it red and imo without text and it'll be amazing!

And if you'll have a second, check out my design and help me with it: http://www.threadless.com/critique/79046/Safe

Schlo

Thanks for your help, I will sub the version without any text.

tjc45

no no text

maybe you should try to make the star look like the sun a little bit more? if thats what its supposed to be

DuMone

It was fantastic as it was before! I´d absolutely buy V4 and wear it everyday!

Schlo

Thanks !!! :D

Schlo

I think I'll sub this one then. Thank you so much for your critiques !!!

DuMone

yessss!!!

Schlo

I will let you know when it's up for voting.

Schlo

:)

willadd

Looks great to me! Sub!

If you have a chance could you score/comment on mine please? Shipwrecked

Schlo

done!

DuMone

yeah, tell us, when it´s up!

Steampunk Art

yes i think its ready for submission

if you got a sec, can you please comment on mine?

Schlo

thanks!

Schlo

Thanks!!

DuMone

done! I gave you all I had - $5 - good luck!!!

Schlo

Thanks !!!

Schlo

Come on, give me your (last) $5 !! :)

Schlo

Wouldn't it be nice to vote ? Comments very much welcomed !!!

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