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The idea that the fox's body includes a brush and pencils doesn't really come across that well given that its all just tan and brown...maybe try adding some color to the illustration, that way it will be more obvious what you're going for. I also think you could play around with the placement...I like the idea, just needs some more work!


Hacve some color on his tail, and some paint swooshes on the ground, as if the fox's been paitning,,


Sweet, thanks bottlehed! THIS is constructive critisism.


I also think it's too simple, the brush and the pencils don't stand out that much. I woud add some color to the pencils, make the color tray like bottleHeD said and maybe do the whole linework in black, on a white or light grey tee.

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