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Little wannabe superman tried to jump the fence to save the world but caught his pants on the fence. Shouldn't have worn them on the outside.
Hahaahha, this is so funny, dude!
But I don't like the text bubble.
Pls comment mine?
thanks :) and i'll drop the bubble :)
hehe, nice idea! you worked with outlines on the character and no outlines on the fence, maybe adapt both to the same style. with the shading you have you could go without i think ^^
would be great if you have time to comment & rate my submission parrots of the carribean :)
Very clever idea. Any chance you could give the grass a little more flow-instead of a straight line bring it out a little under the little fellow. I actually don't mind the bubble.
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Haha I like this. Def loss the bubble. Was this done in photoshop? If so I'd try to do it in illustrator, it'll look cleaner and it's easier to print.
thanks for the comments :)
@JeanHackman, yeah it was done on photoshop lol. i don't have illustrator - how do you get it?
it's a nice idea...
things i think you should change\lose\improve:
the grass. it's coming to an abrupt end which looks not good.
the kid: his anatomy is a bit messed up, it's not too bad mind you, but i think if you want this to have a real shot at getting printed (which concept wise it has a lot of chance!) you should work on the anatomy some more.
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fixed the grass, neck, hair, cape and arms
this is almost done!
use a model for the placement.
any comments for cutting onions makes me cry?
Yeah, I think you should use real Tee shirt for better look, dude!
Try to download the Tee templates free from rodrigobhz.
and pls comment mine.
placement with model :)
thinking about submitting, should i ?
Haha its funny. I would fade the grass using halftones instead of cutting it off. Keep it up!
This one's Hilarious!
I say the same as Kevin. Fade the grass.
you could add a moon as light source and move the rest down a bit.
My only issue is he's sort of randomly gotten stuck there. Maybe some other young heroes could be in the distance flying off after bullying him?
Thanks for the comments :)
Yeah I'll fade the grass
I'm won't add a moon, I did that in v1 and it looked really dark so I changed it to day time.
@noelle nice idea but it's not bullies that put him there, he was jumping the fence and because his pants were on the outside they got caught on the fence lol
funny. somthings wrong with the cape where it touches the fence
I agree with @nitai, Where does the cape go?
Hilarious! Yeah, i agree with others, work more on the cape.
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And what do you think of my new idea, Princess and the Frog ?
faded grass, fixed cape.
hey labellavita1! great improvement over the last versions! i think you are ready to submit this one, i like it so much and always makes me laugh ^^
would be great if you can comment & rate my new submission keeping me alive :)
Thanks hannesjung :D
I will :)
Hi there! Definitely looking much better! Have you tried to play with a different placement? Just a thought. It really looks that painful. Fun! :)
Could you please score and comment my first sub?
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Looks great so far! I think it could be a little smaller and maybe make the grass fade in a half tone. Good job!
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Cape is heaps better :D
I'm not sure how that'll look on a ahem larger female model..
The placement, that's all. Maybe make the design a bit smaller?
smaller placement. :)
placement better ?
i think you could still make it a little smaller (but not much!).
to submit this, you should crop the left arms better and add a shadow to the model.
any ideas for eating mushrooms?
smaller placement, just a touch lol.
added shadows to model.
yeeh! :D i like the idea man
I like the improvements, I think its ready
thanks for commenting.
@kevin10992 thanks for your help through the versions :)
the placement is better.
If you have time, can anybody critique my design. Also, can anybody tell me how i can change my thumbnail. I'm new here.
I like it, cool.
thinking of submitting, should i ?
added more tears and bit more green to grass. :)
fixed a small placement mistake.
Really nice. I think it's time t submit.
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and i will :)