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Ok, which style up there looks best? I want to get a feel for the best style before doing to rest of the artwork. rnrnAnd if you have other suggestions, I'd be glad to hear them.
For me: C, maybe even more smuged.
I could use your help with this if you have the time:
kh kh kh khu kid cudi
im liking either the A or C.
but if i had to pick one.
definitely the C.
and if you get the time
could you critique mine?
It's hard to say, not knowing what the concept is, but I think either A or C.
I'm looking for a silhouette type of art, but I thought the shading would maybe enhance it. And the name gives a bit of it away.
C looks best
I prefer C, but I guess that could change depending on the design as a whole.
I was thinking C all along, but sometimes people see textures and automatically turn off, so I was skeptical
C without a doubt.
Please check out my latest critique if you have time, thanks.
I, the C's have it :)
a) definitely not b
b) the texture on c gives it dimensionality
c) a is the most graphical and silhouette-esque
C is good. But I agree, its hard to really choose without seeing the whole thing.
spare a vote for my design? :)
I like c as well, but I think the shading should look less photoshop effecty:)
Please score my design: Bearminator
The photoshop effect is the response I was worried about with it.
c is better
C it is! I hope to have a new version up soon!
C for sure. I'm really curious to see where this is going to go.
If you could pop over to score this, I'd be ever so grateful. Thanks!
I'm working on the texture of C in the previous version, but here is the basic design. Should there be buildings on the ground? Should I give it clouds or some kind of swirly stuff? I look forward to your comments!
i would add texture/detail to the moon! right now it just looks like a glowing circle. maybe add some craters .
i like the ideea. but i think it needs more work. the tip of the shoes, the face and the moon. more on the moon. try to put some texture on it. like some gray lines showing the craters and stuff. and drop the shadow :)
PS if you have the time, please help me out and critique this
Thanks for your comments. As I said, this is a concept. I'm working on textures right now.
Ah, so this is where you were going with this. Pretty trippy. i like random, bizarre designs like these. Put clouds in the background and light dots nears the base of the T to suggest city lights. I think this would wok best if you tiptoe around hints, instead of actually showing stuff.
If you could help me with my last day of voting, I'd be ever so grateful. Thanks!!
lol, i like it :P
if you have a minute, critique mine? thanks :)
I personally wouldn't add anything just work on the man and the moon to liven them up a bit. I looks like the man is hanging from the moon which I'm sure he is and he should be so adding anything else may ground him.
Love it, so random and cool. Like the sillouette too, kind of a "Singing in the Rain" Vibe a bit.
B&W TV when you have a second.
i like it, keep working is getting awesome
can u please
check on my
gratz on your dancing tree.
my smoker guy was kick out from scoring for low score the 1 day, i got a new idea check it out
I fixed his face, placed his hand on his head, and gave the moon texture.
Still conflicted on what the design is missing. (Buildings, scenery, etc.)
Feedback is appreciated!
Maybe its just the tippy tippy top of a building... to show just how high he is... the hand placement helps with that assumption too...
check out mine if you have a second!
I would make the gradient around the moon smaller, and maybe put some highlights on the silhouette (he's next to a light source after all!)
Let me know what you think.
Hope you could help with mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/72957/What_Does_This_Button_Do
Alright, I'm working on a new one, where the gradient of the buildings is flipped so it's dark on top and light on bottom.
haha, i know!
SEE VER. 5.
This is a mock up of a different color sky/shirt. I think I'll stick to the coloring of ver. 5, but this looks neat too.
i like v4 better
take a look of my new one
the moon is really nice!
I think you have done an awesome job with this. I do like ver 5 colors better. Also.. just a thought... how about making the buildings a little smaller? I think they are too big for someone that is supposed to be way up in the night sky. other than that i think it is a great design.
Can you take a look at mine when you have a chance? http://www.threadless.com/critique/72169/Man_and_the_Moon
oops! that was yours. haha
Here is mine : ) http://www.threadless.com/critique/72978/Raawr
I like this better... smaller buildings might be the way to go... or one in the foreground of the very top! I like the progression though!
Added more buildings, shortened them.
Made the purple more purple than pink.
Wowww, great improvement!!
And I like the background and lighting.
Awesome. I like the extra depth in the buildings now. - Great work!
maybe some windows in the black buildings? cute
Very nice idea! I think maybe losing the gradient on the buildigns and make them a nice simple grey and black would work better. Might look simpler and nicer. And I agree with the adding of windows, could be a very nice touch. Maybe even a few sillhouettes looking out of them??
HOw about some lights in the buildings to bring the busy city to life?