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Used 3 different Shutterstock images in background makeup of design then added different layering effects with model image. the thought was as we hoard the various TV controllers at home we also hoard all the gamer controllers and get obsessed with trying to keep up with all of them.
I would get rid of that box around your design
Critique my design...thanks
no need those box...
and the backgrounds its too (soory) bad..
i think the man with those console is enough...
critique my design please... thx
Yeah get rid of the box and I'm not a fan of the words.
you mean the font? or what it says?
i think Man_inthe_Wood means both... the font and what it says...
maybe it will be great....
coz it was a great idea...
Yeah, no words needed. Words tend to ruin large graphics. The concept is stronger without a title or spelling it out. And most things look better when not in a box. Just my opinion.
Thanks for the opinion!
hah nice bleeding cowboy has been popular lately from what i've noticed.. with such a grungy style any reason for the overpowering box frame? i think it would look better if it wasn't so framed...
I work a lot in print media design...everything has an edge!! got to get a different mindset!
the words looks really bad. get rid of them. the square border looks really chintzy. Try and make the guy look less like a manipulated photograph, more like an original character.
okay on the border, Ill delete that and just let the positive space work it out.
anyone else got any creative input before I start on the rework???
maybe just get rid of the word "Gamer" because I really like the control freak part. The background is pretty busy, but maybe if you just take parts of it (that way it gets rid of the box), like the swirls in the corner, it will give it the idea of your original design while not being overbearing.
Take a minute to critique mine?
Ok here is the new revised graphic- Control Freak. The major thing I did was take out the bkgd box...refine edges etc. Let me know what ya think! D
great concept and illustration.
Could you give me some feedback if its not too much to ask.
anybody else out there for critique? if not I will go ahead and submit.
His hair looks a little clowny. maybe go in and color that with a brown.
Critique mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/70836/Woman_Tree
anybody on the nightshift have any comments or critique before I submit this. thanks!
Dont submit it yet. It would be a waste. if you just cleaned up the image a bit and reduced the number of colours (eg. blue to green shirt fade) it would be a way stronger graphic, and I think you would have a much better chance of winning. also you might consider tracing out the image in illustrator or something and re-working the shirt as a line drawing where the controllers are in neon or something
please comment critique my design.