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Coffee Venndor

  • by staffell
  • posted May 30, 2010
  • 16 Comments

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Laser Bear

i LIKE it. except you spelled "vendor" wrong. but thats unimportant. i think maybe making the design slightly larger would be beneficial, as far as making the font more readable goes. i would hesitate to tell you to make the font larger, but if you simply increase the size of the whole design it might help.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/68806/Sunkissed

bucajack

The spelling is a play on words with the t shirt displaying a Venn Diagram.

cjbug73

I agree with dropping the frames and legend

roastyjack

hmm, like the concept, but i think you might want to remove one or two types of coffee for simplicity sake, also makes it more clear i think Check out mine too plz!

staffell
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I think I might drop the mocha and the hot chocolate for simplicity's sake (although I don't really want to leave anything out). Def going to lose the box, but I really want to keep the legend.

staffell
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mixed some colours up a bit, removed box and integrated key a bit better

seifip

Better.

staffell
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Added Espresso

staffell
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Question: Flat White or Au Lait?

staffell
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bump, any last thoughts? au lait it is

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