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This is my first go at this design. Let me know what you think!


Maybe more variety in the drops, or them all at a slight angle could be cool.


I've changed the size and angle of the drops, added highlights to the eyes and also scaled the whole thing down a bit. What does everyone think now?


not my cuppa arain drop but it would be cool for kids i guess
as far as a finished image its finished but i dont feel it captchers anything that i havent seen a million times before the idea isint that originall but it is well executed

Ars Fera

Thanks for the comment!
This is cute, but I hear what Jesus KrisT and Louisfar are saying.. I'm not sure if I'd personally wear it, but I'm sure it could make a good kids tee.
Now for critiquing! This is a great improvement from the last V :) The only things that bother me are the little tufts of cloud where his legs and arms come out. They sort of remind me of turkey legs or something.. I would get rid of them and just have a small curved line for where the arms and legs sprout from.
Other than that, this is cute :) I like it!


yeah I also concur its very cute and version 2 is better

would be better for kids

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Cloud pee rules. Yes, smooth the arm and leg holes. Oh! An idea for you! UV ink! Indoors the cloud has no pee and a straight face. Outside the cloud has a smile and pee!

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