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Bumbling penguin ruins their caroling. I thought it was a humorous take on a classic Christmas song.
Bumbling penguin ruins their caroling.
I thought it was a humorous take on a classic Christmas song.
Cute idea, I'd like to see some more original looking penguins, perhaps and original font and a different shirt color?
And you might want to say "happy holidays" to avoid alienating people.
Critiques welcome, btw
V2 is the same design, except for a different tee color, and I added a model view for a better idea.
When I first saw it I kind of didn't understand what was going on. Since you have the exclamation points after 'Christ' it looks like the sentence is finished when you just glance at it, I would put a '...' after it to show that that penguin isn't finished. Also, I'm not sure if the other penguins is just sliding in front or if he fell. I would try to show that more clearly. I love the penguins, though!
If you have time:
Hi April-Lily.. Thanks for your critique. The reason I put the exclamation mark there was because I was thinking like he meant to continue the song but instead saw the other penguin falling and instead it became a surprised shout. I thought if I did not have the punctuation, it wouldn't be as emphatic!
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I think this is super cute, its ready to submit it. amost doesnt even need to be an x-mas shirt its so cute.. make it an all year round shirt.
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