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House Party

  • by loldisrox
  • posted Sep 01, 2009
  • 26 Comments

Everyone likes a house party. Which person are you?



First submission, be gentle. :)

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loldisrox

Everyone likes a house party. Which person are you?

First submission, be gentle. :)

mgill52

great drawing, but really needs color

cstrebeck

You have great style. I love the lines of the design. I don't know that color would make it exponentially better, but it wouldn't hurt to try. Overall good first submission.

AlexMacDuff
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that is flippin awesome!

jaz999

Great design but I agree, it needs something more, either colour or do something fancy with the lines (effects/colour)

RedRobotMonkey

Such a great style you have there. An amazing first sub if I ever saw one.

loldisrox

I had a go at playing around with colour but couldn't really settle on anything that looked right with this design. I kind of like the simplicity of black fine line on the white.

But I think I may have another go to see if there is any way of making it look more colourful. Thanks for the feedback !:)

squintygirl

Love the dude with the pylon on his head.

anniemark

love it!!

FRICKINAWESOME
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Color or highlights please and this will be the Where's Waldo? tee of the frat house!

theclaw

very...very nice drawing

Malurocks

Cool design !!! But with some work could turn out really great !!!

boostr29
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really nice...great first sub!

ryinghill

Agreed with all the above
(minus the spam)

dlb-arts

Goodjob man!

B 7
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fantastic

Chevsy

I miss house parties....but this brings it all back GR8

sausage_moe

wonderful! so much going on in there!5$

kuerbis

Really like this one, love your style, and I don't think it needs colour. Think that would be too much and would just make it look confusing and crammed. If you use colours I'd maybe just put highlights but make them semitransparent in pastel colours.

loldisrox

Thankyou all for feedback on my first sub. (:

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