The Adventures of Mr. Bullet

Stay tuned to see what happens in the next issue!



Thanks to those who helped critique - especially Bygrinstow whose color suggestion really helped.



Thanks to Manos for the template and iRocko for the tee pics.



Tee could be dark grey or white too.



Thanks for voting!

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Stay tuned to see what happens in the next issue!

Thanks to those who helped critique - especially Bygrinstow whose color suggestion really helped.

Thanks to Manos for the template and iRocko for the tee pics.

Tee could be dark grey or white too.

Thanks for voting!

Resistance
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yay! its up! 5!!

wotto
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This is very cool, not sure Threadless will go for it but still very cool

ginetteginette
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is it supposed to be like comic panels? because the composition of them seems really bad, even for comics. there's a lot of weird spacing.

brentendo

I agree the spacing is a bit iffy, but the idea is great. I love the comic book effect on the last frame!

evan3
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WOOOW
5

mgill52

with fixed spacing, this would be so awesome!

Maltzmania
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i've seen comics with this kind of spacing, and I believe the spacing is also part of the joke, but yes it does look a bit awkward

but still funny and would look great on the shirt with tiny improvements! 4!

the_jcw

I like the sound it makes "sworp"

lawrence loh
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something different! nice!

staffell
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aww, i wish it had been an arrow :(

Zaideee

haha nice!

SuperRyan
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very cool

Delrondu

This is great!

chelly

hilarious

mezo
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Really great idea, but I wish the comic style was more old school (think 1 color with hand drawn lines).

Santo76
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hahaha, fun stuff!

C0ri

Ha!

Eika.Dopludo
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i think it's unusual way of thinking...and
Ginette is right about composition,check out mine, please
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FRICKINAWESOME
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I dunno, i really think the box design is part of the parody here, but maybe it could be re-designed in more of a glass breaking shape to the whole piece. The actual joke and idea behind this and slight tweaking of comic book ridiculousness is brilliant duder, hopefully this will be your third or 4th print!

4$

ilya yas

i agree with dexter.. some tilt to the windows would be great... other than that, very nice design!

Braniel

Awesome job man!

tom_moonen

very nice... you put the comic style into top gear!
you deserve a print man. I also like your other work and notice you're good at the multi-drawing story thing.

A thing someone said as he was making a critique on your T-Rex wasn't allways a killer comic design (liked that a lot too btw) was: everybody does the same.

Maybe you could try making somekind of a reverse/backwards logic joke/story, or use a converging (as apposed to linear) development.
As i wrote this i was thinking of two movies: Memento & Magnolia. Hard to put into a t shirt but would be nice.

Keep up the good stuff! 5€!

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