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We are Siamese if you please

  • by angelx129
  • posted Mar 15, 2009
  • 24 Comments

an old photo of me

original artwork was a scratch clayboard

you can see in the back



not sure but let me know what you think!

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angelx129

an old photo of me
original artwork was a scratch clayboard
you can see in the back

not sure but let me know what you think!

angelx129

btw, i was thinking using the felt/velvet ink

marxdarx

its kind of hard to see the actual work. Can you submit a larger pic the design itself? it looks interesting

angelx129

sure~ heres a bigger version and a lil more detail

angelx129

a bigger verion
the v1 has the shirt placement

TheIcePixy

Interesting concept, but the faces are a little weird . . .

I think I want to see the faces as a more solid, simpler design or something . . . The couch is cool . . . maybe try to make the girls fit in with the line style of the couch, but in a way that helps their faces stand out. They kind of disappear right now.

iluvtees

wicked awesome. It's got like voodoo i cant help but stare.

angelx129

thanks for the feedback~

angelx129

i think the girls stand out a bit more
though people don't like the face i feel like if i solidify her face, she'll be even more creepy or ghost like rather than the estheic that i'm trying to keep her in
please let me know what you think!!!

type- i was thinking of using the felt ink but plain print is fine too

rialb

I think it looks pretty cool but you probably can't see the design if your close up. It could be a little bigger

angelx129

hmm bigger huh?
i feel it will be cropped or something...

i'll fool around with the placement~

angelx129

any other critics?

i was also thinking perhaps i could have half on front and the other half wrapping to the back... but i don't know if i like it when i mocked it up

Francesa

You could make it bigger by taking out some of the sofa in the middle.
The girls have black feet - was that intentional? Why?
This would be way better if you drew each girl separately. They could be the same pose and from the same picture, but this is so obviously copy/paste/flip, it will be commented on in the voting.

angelx129

thanks for the great critique!!!

her feet are black because she has socks on which is why her toes aren't showing.

i actually just wanted the girl to be by herself but when i flipping it around to see which way she should be, i found this which i thought would be interesting~ but i think i'll just go back to what i originally had!

please also critique my NEW version

angelx129

i think the girls stand out a bit more
though people don't like the face i feel like if i solidify her face, she'll be even more creepy or ghost like rather than the estheic that i'm trying to keep her in
please let me know what you think!!!

type- i was thinking of using the felt ink but plain print is fine too

angelx129

any and/or every critique would be great!!!

angelx129

v4 has only the front version, which do people like better?
please let me know what you think i would really like to submit this soon!!!


type- i was thinking of using the felt ink but plain print is fine too

angelx129

sorry, the top is the back and the bottom is the front

angelx129

any critique would be great...

mreisel
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I like it. I would like it more if the 2 figures weren't mirror images of each other. I'd like to see them sharing a toy or something that makes you want to look to the back to see the rest of the story. I really like the colors and the style. Thanks for looking at my cat design.

angelx129

u was thinking, should i even have the backing on them?? or just keep it as is and add elements to differentiate them?

thanks for the critiques!!

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