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I've had this concept floating in my head for awhile...the Joy of Text just gave me a reason to make it happen. Hope you like it :)

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zipperking
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I've had this concept floating in my head for awhile...the Joy of Text just gave me a reason to make it happen. Hope you like it :)

Maltzmania
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move along. 5!

DesignbyProxy
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Nice idea, I might work on the letter spacing a bit though. It is a little strange, especially between the S and the first E

campkatie
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i'd wear this!

sentiment

I love the colors.
I wish the font was a bit more appealing.

Nice!

jess4002
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cool!

SoulfumeInc

nice one dude. i agree that the font could be a little spicier, but im diggin it!

zipperking
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yeah, i played around with different fonts but I figured since it represented "nothing" I wanted to keep it pretty plain. Besides Century Gothic is in my top 10 :)

Arrow08
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cool effect, clever concept. haha 'move along'

bradenf

text

handface

get rid of the font and id give it a 5. but now that theres text im giving it a 0. sorry

zipperking
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^haha! that's awesome! I knew I shouldn't have put any text on my JOY OF TEXT shirt! oh man, that made my day :)

DesignbyProxy
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Hand face = Facepalm

lordog

lol @ handface.

looks great dude!

PeculiarTiffany
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I should have known there were going to be "lose the text" comments, even in a text based competition. I absolutely love this, especially on the print! I'd hang it up with pride, yes I would.

Shegan

There was a comment about kerning "letter spacing" and i'd have to agree, it needs some work in some areas.

bennyd302
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looks good, great colors

ginetteginette
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i'm trying to see the spacing errors but i really can't. maybe i don't have quite an eye for text that i thought i had, but i also think it might just be a trick of the eye -
there are those white stars between the S and E that maybe make it seem like there are spacing issues.
whatever!
i like it.

3x1minus1

in defense of the 'lose the text' comments -- when you're voting page after page, it's easy to miss when designs are part of a 'threadless loves _' contest. well to me at least; i barely ever notice those. :\

alexmdc
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2 designs submitted - Score now!

another great sub $$

alexmdc
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2 designs submitted - Score now!

another great sub $$

cyanidee

its so simple but works really nice. there is something really appealing about it

addictedtobreathing

I think it's beautiful, even with the - god forbid!! - text.

Somaa

I'm suprised no one has mentioned yet that this could easily be made in photoshop in a couple of minutes. . .

FRICKINAWESOME
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I like how the design goes up onto the neck of the tee. It's a cool concept, but a font that better disappeared into the sapce beyond it might have sold this concept more. Still a fun sub.

Jhari

Pretty! :) I'd like it better with some better lettering though. That font is just too plain!

idilek
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Great colors !

Silent-T

Pretty space image, but the type could be more nicely involved in the image, rather than just slapped on top. There's barely any typographical work involved here, aside from you choosing a typeface, which I think is the point of the competition, right?

Silent-T

The work on this site is a good example of how to treat type as more than letterforms.

Curdswallop

i agree with silent-t.

while i really think the idea of the words is nicely contrasted with the flashy background, font and placement needs to be rethought!

band-it
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love it

csaboston89

i think this would lokk better as a print

bobobob1230

i really like this

BrandonB11

this is legit 5$

Miss Fortunate

Not sure about the text and it's placement, but the stars, background, and colors are very nice.

LINK2DPAST

I like the idea, and the background, but I think something is just... off about the text. I don't think it's subtle enough. You seem to be getting a lot of comments like this. Maybe do a re-sub before the contest is over?

wombatgal

I absolutely adore this shirt and hope it gets printed. I'm going to school for astronomy, and think it's super ironic.

$5, for sure

psycho_doug

i like it without the text, atleast take it out from the middle of everything, make it small off to the side n subtle, and maybe get a better phrase.

buko
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Great one! 5$

heyheyitsme

i like the colors too...but agree i think the text needs to be more interesting

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