Teddies Gotta Eat Too

  • by aled
  • posted Oct 09, 2008
  • 25 Comments

Clearly only at doodle stage right now - in need of a lot of development and working onto a tee if you guys see any potential. Lemme know what you think. Cheers.

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aled
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Clearly only at doodle stage right now - in need of a lot of development and working onto a tee if you guys see any potential. Lemme know what you think. Cheers.

Ivantobealone
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If they are, as I think, teddy bears. Its incredibly good. Ho for it

krokun
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Yes yes yes, develop!!

littlem

hahah cute! i remember someone else working on something like this a couple years ago! i forgot the username, though.
too funny

David T
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Great idea. Definitely has potential... you may proceed.

scotties123

this is cool. but the fish in the back by the two other bears looks like a whale cuz its so big. if its meant to look like its jumping in front of the 3 bears, it doesnt fit with the size of the fish in front of their face.
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garciagirl

^Umm...I think that's a rock, not a fish
I would love to see this finished :)

ihollywould

The bears in the back and the bears in the front are different styles. I understand what you were trying to accomplish (make the background bears shadows), but it doesn't really work well. I suggest changing the style of the front bears since the rest of the design is cel-shaded. The water is very beautiful as it is and it would be good to see the bears the same way.

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davidfromdallas
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teddy bears. trying to catch salmon. on a shirt.

eh.

you got so many cooler ideas, man. like astronauts. where the hell is that?

aled
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Haha. That's kind of on hold. I think this concept has potential. Let's face it, cute is king. I have a different direction for this that I might explore instead. I agree it's a bit tame at the moment. I think it needs a sinister edge...

As for the the bits that look crappy - this is just a crappy mock-up so it's bound to look crappy.

Gar0
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Yeah!

crit mine x

flealicious

I really like it, the concept is just so darn cute. Would like to see it on a tee!
Keep up the good work (and please help me with my own critiques!)

ginetteginette
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maybe i'm dumb but i didn't realize they were meant to be teddy bears at first (which is dumb because it's not really how you draw things, i just assumed you had tweaked your style or something for this)
maybe a bowtie (all my teddy bears had red bow-ties) or obvious tags coming out of their buts would make it more obvious (to me), and maybe funnier? :/

aled
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Yeah - it's not obvious at the moment, I agree. I'll endeavor to make it more obvious. bow-ties is a great idea.

SEVEN-HUNDRED

Whatever happened to the Lion Tellituby gore-fest, did that ever go anywhere else?

This is great too

shrimpies4life

this is cute! but one thing i would change is to make it more for a t shirt
because you wouldnt want a big rectangle picture on your shirt

stefazhion91

Cute, but I think this need to further develop, but I hope you will get improve on them =)

stefazhion91

Cute, but I think this need to further develop, but I hope you will get improve on them =)

stefazhion91

Cute, but I think this need to further develop, but I hope you will get improve on them =)

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