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i think you could make it bigger and instead of slashing the shirt, make him slash his way out of the plastic...why would he break out of a box he could have just as easily slashed out of?
I thought of that, might get rid of the slash, but I will see
thanks though ralf
i agree with king ralf. looks good though
you shoudl have him attacking an outlet
I could try that
Could have him attacking a pink bunny....
just throwing the slash in a different position
looks kinda blurry but other then that I like!
the first version is clean, I was just trying to get a feel about the slash.
why is it a battery doing that?
why is it a? He's breaking out of his package/his prison but I guess tis one is flying over heads too...hmmmm
i like the ripped cloth better than the knife. i think you should do something with the size of the battery carton, it seems a bit too square.
i still say he shoudl be aiming for something- a rechargable, maybe. Or an outlet.
i got another idea where teh battery is gettin strangled with a power cord by an outlet, would that be better?
At first I thought it'd be a leakage, because a bad battery makes me think of that. maybe?
i thought bout that chan but noone on here likes feces or anything having to do with relieving themselves
How about having a slash on the battery, like he's injured .. so his blood is sort of the batt leak?
Maybe you could have the other battery in the pack already attacked by the one that ran away.
So he's really the BAD BATTERY?
Hope this helps.
Yea though about that...so for this thought everyone suggests leaking?
Except for those that thing he whould be attacking something
trying to make the package a tad more umm less flat looking
well thats no good
I like it but try not adding a dark blue to the hole in the package. Just add a light blue or grey. Make the bad battery bigger to emphasize depth.
Please critique mine
Clear is always hard to depict. I like the V3 package hole the best because the darker one just takes too much of my eye. Maybe play with a highlight in the middle and offset a concentric cut profile of the hole shape (using the blue values you have but staying away from the darkest). kind of hard to explain. Also play with the cut Dark hole section maybe try the same as the package hole but tricking they eye with the concentric tonal shapes. Great to see you using a different color other than black…..making the black a super dark rich value of your strongest color gives more richness to the finished piece. Although the battery used in parody is black and copper. Hope this helps….great idea. Also one last thought what if there was a cut he has now started that he is walking…kind of a motion effect but not too much.
I like this a lot, Make the battery bigger, and make whatever that is in his hand easier to identify.
thanks web, very insightful stuff
what does he have in his hand? A box cutter?
If he does have a box cutter make it more defined bc that would be awsome.
Please critique mine
actually its supposed to be the ripped shirt. Originally it had a knife, but that is never a good idea
give him a scissor and make a rope hanging from the rip in the shirt?.. great artwork..
this is quite funny... you should make his knife/cutter more detailed..
so far i need to redife the item in his hand