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skating in space critique welcomed
skating in space
I think Skate-tro-naut makes more sense and it sounds a little better. The design looks good though. If you do another one like this the guy could be skating in a crater on the moon empty pool style!
I agree with Eric, at least the n should be with the aut. Otherwise I think this is pretty complete.
hehe clever idea
i think you could submit
althou i think EricDiaz is right about the name
thanks for your comments i made some changes with text i hope you like it
check mine out?
but does not read well
maybe other text
im not really digging
i think it may hurt your score,
because people who like the shirt wont like the word
if your going to keep text, i think you should have
text that is more revlevent
but htast just me
yea i agree with ladrones
i like the design but just change the font
I'd lose the text and have the astronaut skating down off the shoulder... maybe make it a little bigger too.
What he said.
This is good and fun, but the text spoils it.
i agree about the font, but i like the word skateronaut. can you incorporate it into the design a little more seamlessly?
I actually like the font and the placement of it on the shirt.
Skate-tron-aut. Sounds pretty cool.
comment on mine please :]
i would love to have your input you seem like a great artist.
I don't think it needs the text cos it doesn't really add to the meaning of the image. Otherwise great image... random concepts - woot :)
Just ditch the text.
Maybe do try without the texts?? Let's see the how worked =)
Great!!!! I like it very very much!!! Just submit it! ;D
Vote for Italian Love, please
I'm workin' on something similar:
but also on that:
aha im allabout the astronauts lol checkout my first design
as far as ur design
ide add some more swirls and loose or change the text
looks extremely out of place.
maybe if you could make the letters out of those swirls ur doin under the astro.
great work so far keep it up!
and i just updated my design!
Critique mine if you have the time
WOULD BE AWESOME
great illustration and colors! i like rkotar's idea of making the word out of the swirls
my design is up for scoring. could ya help me out and vote and leave a comment? thanks!
happy worst day ever
superb i love the shades you used in it i think you should submit it
If you have time do suggest on my work
I think you should stick with the word skatetronaut, but maybe have it as a whole word, on one line, as it took me quite a while to work out what it said. You could also try incorporating it into the design more, as someone suggested above. The concept, and the design, is great though!
If you have a second, I have a design currently being scored... if you wouldn't mind voting / commenting on it, that'd be much appreciated, thanks! :)
Awesome drawing, but drop the text...
Dark side of the moon and
Desperate Houses are up for scoring for the last day!
I appreciate if you score or comment on it!
Hi Buko. Your designs are works of art. Definitely some of the most beautiful on here. As I beginner I would love to know a little about your processes. This one looks done in Illustrator but I look at some of your others like Mr T(iger) and think OMG how did he get the distressed/vintage look, and do you stick to 8 colours or request the special print technique?
By the way, ant pointers from a seasoned pro like yourself would be awesome. This is my first design on here and I was hoping for a bit more constructive crit. Thanks.