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Hi folks!!!The first version is rather simple. But hope you like it.
The first version is rather simple. But hope you like it.
Indeed a bit simple, but still a good concept. Maybe put some dandelion seeds blowing off?
is this a picture...? anyway, i agree make it blow, but do somhting witty, like a cloud sneezing, or it's a fan.
no don't make it blow! i love it the way it is so much! how did u do this? just sketching on ill or photo?
needs a concept behind it rather than just an object placed on the shirt, and there's already a dandelion print
personally i dont like it but it has a concept behind and more comopsition work, if you sub this it will most likely get dropped from the competition
i suggest you browse through the catalog to get a better idea of what gets printed here, if you want to go with something lacking concept you need a really, really, REALLY good illustration work to have a printing chance
idk that dandelion print is not the same idea as this one. but maybe a concept since ever1 wants one
i think that it's technically really good, but you need to improve the concept here, like other said, you have skills but try to rework it to have a good score ;-)
thx very much for ur suggestions. I will keep working on it and submit a new version, very soon.
(and its not a picture! :))
maybe do (and this will be really labor intensive) a big belt print of many dandelions?
Crit pretty please
Personally, I like it. I don't know much about what gets selected, so I don't think you should give much weight to what I'm saying, but I think a haunting image, like this, is great.
Mind giving yet another critique?
I just added some dandelion seeds falling of.
I agree with againstbound too, it has to have a solid concept. Since the word has lions is in it, maybe you could try something with that? Like parachuting lions holding on to the falling seeds. Or have the big dandelion on its own forming a roaring lions head. I dunno, just needs something else.
new idea, new style!
Interesting idea. The base of the "bulb" seems a little harsh against the softness of the flower.... Perhaps some overlap to make it look a little more natural?
I love the glow look, and the little flyaway bits.
don't like the dandelion!
Cool, this looks great!! I really like this, I think the dandelion looks great, the only thing letting the design down is the light attachment. I think it need more detail...like an actual light attachment and you could even add a light chain hanging down....something like in this jpg I found doing a google search....http://images.jupiterimages.com/common/detail/53/21/23372153.jpg
I like the green colour of the attachment though. Nice design!
The actual dandelion "tuft" should be in front of the electrical string leading to it - the hard line just doesn't look right! Is the dodge effect possible for threadless t's ?
Can they do the glowy thing?
I wonder if they can do the glow thing too
as everyone is saying, I'd suggest an alternative to the glowing to make this more printable. A halftone gradient could be your best friend!
I'd appreciate a critique:
cool idea. work on the lamp base. it's crude in quality compared to the rest
crit mine pls:
thx for your suggestions and tips!! dont know if threadless can make this glowing, i hope so. but i can also try another methode.
If its printed, the dandilion bulb could look cool in puff ink or suede.
this is really beautiful... but i don't like wearing shirts with print that hangs down the middle. It makes me feel like I'm wearing a tie. Maybe you could position it somewhere else, or make it a lantern.
but looking back at your previous designs i like this one the best. And i like the first version but this is the best.
improved the light effect on the lamp and modified all a bit.
The light onthe lamp base is'nt coming from the right direction.
I like the bulkiness of it in comparison with light dandelion. I think you should draw it by hand or at least edit the photo so it looks cleaner