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d3d
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it's bland. it's just the same image repeated three times. the joke is cheap and dull. the colours aren't exciting. it's not for me.

esthergrondahl

Does anyone have any constructive critiques? Thanks, d3d for being an ass.

This isn't my work, but I was still looking for thoughts, constructive ones, that is.

iDanSimpson

in all honesty, i have to agree with leon. sorry...

esthergrondahl

Any suggestions. It's my sister's. She's just starting out. What will make it better?

ISABOA
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I think the joke would be more subtle if two of the fish were bubbling normally -

but it is fart humor - the fish are well done

esthergrondahl

Yeah, no. I'm not a visual artist. Good try though.

aled
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Hi Esther. Long time no see

esthergrondahl

I took a little break. I've been having a rough time, but doing better now.

aled
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Fish are great. Concept is so so :)

esthergrondahl

Punk Rock Cock is amazing, fatheed.

esthergrondahl

My sister started in design school last year. This is her first critique, so, any comments help. Thanks, fatheed.

esthergrondahl

omg, fatheed, all of your designs are witty.

aled
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Hey, thanks!

sonmi
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i don't know if any design changes can make this a better sub. the concept itself is kind of weak, like d3d said (who i don't think was being an ass; just a honest voice)

sonmi
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i know... i mean, i don't know what changes can be made in its critique form to improve on it, because even if it's a beautiful illustration, it needs a stronger idea, otherwise it's just some beautifully rendered fish with bubbles coming out of their butts.

esthergrondahl

By the way, congratulations for all of your prints, Sonmi. I've been gone for a few months.

sonmi
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thanks esther :) and welcome back.

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