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  • by Haasbroek
  • posted Jul 26, 2007
  • 56 Comments

This little guy is a bit distraught.

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Haasbroek
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3 designs submitted - Score now!

This little guy is a bit distraught.

Kookaberry
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Oh it's so funny yet it's missing something to me. I do hope that any constructive criticism given to you that you use to hopefully modify and resubmit. It doesn't feel there quite yet. I suppose I would say that the text is unnecessary and I'm not fond of how the sidewalk just sort of ends in the middle of the shirt. Perhaps consider a different background or a different placement. I'll give you a 3 just cause I like the concept but I think with an improved design I could definitely give you a 5.

mllesatine

I love this, but I would prefer it without the text.

celinebean

HAHAHA i like the test
its perfect how you did it small
and in the corner.
but it could be good without the text as wel.

milofranceschi

poor 'p', i bet it wishes it was an 's'

fusion711

The perspective of the sign looks a bit off. I also don't know if the P needs a face. It is cute, but I don't know if it's necessary, I'd prefer if it wasn't there.

Maybe the text could go on the back or the sleeve, make it a bit less obvious but still there to be seen.

I'll still say $5, just cos it's cool.

comical morbidity

Haha aww. I love this. I would wear it although I am torn on the text. Whatever is done I will still wear. 5

classicrockrox

Not sure about the text, or the background color, but I absolutely love the concept and design!

Saloc

I think I'd like it even better with the text either gone or more noticeable, and with the P's face more obvious; at first I couldn't see the eyes and such. $5 because it's allllmost there.

stainedsugar

It doesn't need the text. I got the idea right away...and then scrolled down and saw the text, and thought it was overdone. You should make the street wrap around the shirt or something, to make it a little more interesting.

mrspaceman

Without the text this gets a $5 from me. Great work!

xscarsxstitchesx

i love this. so much you have no idea lmao

kimmytree

I agree, no text. Without it, $5.

hanabi

I love it, maybe if you change the backgroundcolour I would love it even more

FRICKINAWESOME
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Just make the "p" hanging its head a bit and making a sad face, or go the other way and give it a big shocked face at seeing the sign. Or you can have a thought bubble of scribbles to make the "p" show its disgust at the letterism of this part of town. fun concept, but the drawing needs to get there a bit more towards the message.

homygoshh

so cute. ;)

sveto

this is AWESOME the way it is!! dont do anything to it!
your style reminds me of paul madonna's all over coffee comics. absolutely great! :)

ChaosbyDesign

thats totally discrimination, put it to the man P

sp0m

this is hilarious. it could still use a little bit of work though.

kannibear

haha aw! i would totally buy this =]

kannibear

and i like the textt
5 =]

snemitz

Would be great on a kid's shirt without the text. $5

illeagle

"well that sucks" is unnecessary, the expression on his face is sufficient... i'd buy it without the text there 5$

Maggie66

I agree. It would be perfect without the text.

abzdragon

HAHAHA I love it!

taz-pie

hello from an ex-capetonian :)

teemann97

i really like it, but the design should tell it's own story; meaning loose the text and have him walking away from it or something.

green frog84

HAHA
niiiiiiiiceeeeeeeee

Lochness-a

hahahahaha. yay. oo. ahhh. um, awesome.

twix a mix

i don't think you should change a thing on this. the text completes it, that's what made me laugh out loud! 5 i would totally buy it without a second thought

podunk42

I'd buy it if there were no text. Also, I'd like the P to look a bit more sad than surprised.

dids

so races! lol... very funny =]

Ellieme

kinda reminds me of Tom Gauld's drawing style... :-)

katzekween

take away the text

druff

too simple and not on white

Lroo82

i love the concept!

franx
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:)

valverij

WONDERFUL....take out the text and it'll be a perfect $5!

Jeanicious

The text makes it even better!
5 points!

filak
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Nice $5

goldiefreak

love it but the art says it all w/out the text. no need for see and say...
5 without text.
3 with.

sharonauyong

love it with the text! love the shirt.
cute x)

kaloyster
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I need this

aled
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This is fucking ace! lol

aled
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without text all the way.

DJ_Banks

agree no text. print print print!!

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