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dogfight

  • by fatboyjim
  • posted May 27, 2007
  • 25 Comments

would suit natural or light blue. comments please

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fatboyjim

would suit natural or light blue. comments please

Ikarusmyancestor

back one needs to look only alittle more like SNoopy

Lestaylor

I would bring touches of red down into the brown plane. The dogs hat is good but I could carry it through more then that. Maybe to the supports on the wheel. This would tie the two planes together.
I love the red plane. I think that could stand alone as a design.

beesneak
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darn....I'm working on a dogfight shirt as well....I like yours, but I still plan to submit mine:)

Bowtie

reminds me of "Snoopy and the Red Baron"

mj00
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center placement kills this. Look at the flying formations fighter planes use and use a similar configuration for your dog planes (I'd recommend adding at least one more plane).

Annie in Wonderland

Hahahahaha very cute, but it needs another plane, please. $5

Annie in Wonderland

oh, and some clouds would be nice
i really like your style.

DejaTee

Maybe add some insiginia, Maltese cross, etc? Make it a historical allusion?

And without mounted guns, how are they going to dogfight? It's nice art, but it just looks like 'dogs flying planes' to me.

FRICKINAWESOME
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Love the concept, but so much more could be done to this to really liven up the concept...like perhaps...having an actual dogfight in the air on the tee? Nice idea tho.

amoania

they need to be fighting.

Jimmyray

position the planes coming at each other, or one divebombing from above...gotta translate the "fight" in "dogfight" into the design. The concept is great...light blue shirt for the sky background OK, maybe some better coloring for the planes.

missmargot

Love the planes, but how about angling one of them a bit? Maybe the red one can look as if it's swooping towards the brown one? Then there's a little more 'fight' in it. At the moment it looks like two dogs going for a gentle cruise in two (very lovely) planes.

J-Ray

shouldn't you try to put the "fight" in "dogfight"?

fatboyjim

thanks for all your comments, will create a new version

mephitine

I get the dogfight theme, but my first thought was "bomber"...as in the dogs that leave bombs on my front lawn. I expect little bombs on my back lawn (I've got two little dogs), but running over unexpected big ones with the lawnmower in the front...ugh. And I never see the dogs leaving them, so I can only assume they're flying in undetected to strafe the neighborhood.

fatboyjim

er. thanks for that mephitine

juulesa

Seen something very simlar to this. Other than that, it can use a little more detail.

livenprettygood

clever, but yea they should be fighting

fatboyjim

thanks again for the comments. i have made a few of the suggested changes, see what you all think

janell6267

add some bullets coming from the red plane towards those bullet holes in the tail of the other plane and it's perfect ! :)

pckrbckr

I love it best design in a while. 5$

BrokenArm91

it looks too crowded. i think it would look better if it was just one plane - deffinately a red plane though

great design

mj00
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fatboyjim, I think the improvements you made are perfect. I'm upping the score I gave this :)

Deusex

concerning the improvements...it's better, but the dog in the foreground still looks disinterested. the bullet holes tie the brown to the red, but there's nothing tying the red to the brown....does that make sense?

Perhaps you could redraw his head to look in the red plane's direction? He did just get shot...also, changing the dog's color slightly to something less similar to the plane might make it stand out more.

jahair

they don't look like they're fighting. It needs a little work and I'd buy it.

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