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jean_warhol
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I think the image speaks for itself.
I hope you like it!

chocolatefrog

the prespective is kinda of weird... but i like the idea

jean_warhol
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Really? I think the perspective is pretty good, it wouldnt work too well at another angle.

69k

Nice, but the Mercedes is kind of out of place

Smitty McGillicutty

I love this, and I am thrilled with the changes you made to it in the crit! $5

jean_warhol
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Thanks Smitty! I just used the mercedes to compare the classes.

kiLLyou

funny

amoania

the mercedes is perfect, cuz he's a dr. this is genius!

Ben TM

Funny idea and good illustration. I just think the layout is a little weird. It looks like the Dr P and Mr P "scenes" are separate. Maybe try to overlap some of the elements to make it appear like they are interacting...Or maybe have them side by side and the scaled so that the adult cans are the same size....But I really do like it really

jean_warhol
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The placement is for a sense of superiority

steviec

Yeah, I agree with chocolatefrog, 69k and Ben - the placement is off. I see what you were trying to do: you want to make Dr Pipper the most important image, but in doing so, you lose the dynamic interaction between the two. As it is, the Dr is staring off into the distance, and the Pebbs are watching from afar. You need to bing them on the same level or it doesn't work.

steviec

Oh, and I'm assuming these are American soft drinks? Are they real or is the joke relying on the Dr/Mr comparison?

jean_warhol
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based on Dr. Pepper and Mr. Pibb

OceanCrayon

Good one! Both placements are great...love the concept! $5

kurukuru78

The Alternate Layout is MUCH better.

steviec

Much better! I'd wear this.

jean_warhol
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good thanks!

jean_warhol
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I think the alternate does look better too...

whatupJ

sweet, thou i have no idea what mr. pibb is..

jean_warhol
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its a generic Dr. Pepper

whatupJ

ohhhhhhh.. i thought i saw something about it on family guy--i thought it was made up for the show thou. guess not :) i ♥ dr. p, anyhow

___stereotype

Dude didn't even get his degree!

Ohhhhhh, Mitch Hedberg.

Lovely concept, great execution.

insolity

2nd layout looks much better

Degazio

I get it, but i don't really like it. That style is far too common.. Lil' pokemon eyes.. Merp.

Mandyhello

haha, white trash Mr. Pibb :D

eternis

I prefer the alternate placement.

FRICKINAWESOME
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Yeah....sorry to say, but the 2nd layout really makes this idea work a bunch better and doesn't look as strange to the eye. Great idea, and now with the second design, I can feel secure in 4$ this.

steviec

Shimala, wherever you are: this is a retooling of the design but not a redesign or resbmission. What's the legal status of the alternate placement now?

Can we vote on the alternative?

jean_warhol
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i would think it could be ok.... dunno

aumphalos

How about you keep the sizes of the first placement, but place the Mr. Pibb family slightly to the left? I think that would help with perspective, while being more interesting than the second placement. Would also retain that sense of superiority of which M. Warhol spoke.

superdooperparatrooper

The second placement is amazing. And I love that you changed the names to Pebb & Pipper without it being cheesy... $4

travis76
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i always wanted to compare dr.pepper and mr pibb to dr jekyll and mr hyde....

Syrasha

HAHA awesome. I love the alt. placement. Funny idea!

bulletsalvador

i love dr. pepper but am not to crazy about the design. possibly split the images and place them in different locations?

=)

jean_warhol
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bullet did you see the link image?

future_pepsi_star

I hate Dr pepper, but this is a cute design, and I prefer the second placement :) hehe $4

aleyc19

hahaha
i didnt get at first but now i do! :)
i give it a...$4

bulletsalvador

i click the link image and one image is on top of the other (pibb on top pepper on bottom)

what i meant is separate them completely, meaning two different locations. for example one under each arm pit...lol

Rosemoo

Second Image way better!

fade2red

fuck ya! make mine xl! 5 nucca!

Julie Jerks

I love the concept, and the way it's drawn out, but it looks a bit...cluttered?

probemunky

i've just never liked dr pepper. i dont get it. nice drawing style tho.

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