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Should have thought this through

idea iv had for a few days, finaly got it drew down.

what ya like, what dont ya like haha :)

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iamdeangary

idea iv had for a few days, finaly got it drew down.
what ya like, what dont ya like haha :)

iamdeangary

any comments will be great, just wondering what could be added or if its fine n dandy as it is :)

thanks !

Verdana

This makes me grin.

iamdeangary

hmmm i dont know what ya mean by the MSpaint
but thats anyway lol :)
i think the feet need like thickening as i look at it now, and at first i had a shoe falling
maybe it i made him a little smaller and added the shoe back ?

scoreit

Reckon this is ok.

scoreit

Go with your gut feeling, if it feels right to you, then to hell with our opinions;]

eraseyourname

I don't really get what's going on. Maybe it's just me.

eraseyourname

I like your style though.

iamdeangary

thanks for the crit, keep it coming :)
anything that would make it abit better would be great

its wierd me asking for crit as i usualy do go for my gut feeling but theres sumthing that needs added to this and its like rar :) haha

thanks ! i love the style aswell, glad i found my own style of drawing:)

iamdeangary

Ok so i went ahead and added the shoe with some shading to the character.
crit please

Lalala-Lauren

What's he holding on to????

eraseyourname

His shoe looks kinda rock-like from far away. Make it more shoe-like, and you're set.

Mr_Abacus

the character reminds me a lot of the animation for Gorillaz film clips.

But yeah with a little bit of work, its be awesome.

sylmatil

Way too many colors. Re-draw it in a vector program like Illustrator or Flash with only 5.

I do enjoy the model.

iamdeangary

thanks for the crit :)
il have a new version up some time today !
cheers :)

blonde8007

Decent idea. It would definitely appeal to the crowd that wears cartoony type shirts. Less colors, clean it up a bit.

iamdeangary

can i ask, how do you mean clean it up :)

blonde8007

Well first of all you have to fix the arm waving motion. That is unprintable, or will print poorly. Same with the shoe falling. This is hard for me to critique because it's really not my thing at all.

I guess do that and use the right amount of colors and we can take it from there.

iamdeangary

ahh i get you now :)

thanks alot !

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