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idea iv had for a few days, finaly got it drew down.what ya like, what dont ya like haha :)
idea iv had for a few days, finaly got it drew down.
what ya like, what dont ya like haha :)
any comments will be great, just wondering what could be added or if its fine n dandy as it is :)
This makes me grin.
hmmm i dont know what ya mean by the MSpaint
but thats anyway lol :)
i think the feet need like thickening as i look at it now, and at first i had a shoe falling
maybe it i made him a little smaller and added the shoe back ?
Reckon this is ok.
Go with your gut feeling, if it feels right to you, then to hell with our opinions;]
I don't really get what's going on. Maybe it's just me.
I like your style though.
thanks for the crit, keep it coming :)
anything that would make it abit better would be great
its wierd me asking for crit as i usualy do go for my gut feeling but theres sumthing that needs added to this and its like rar :) haha
thanks ! i love the style aswell, glad i found my own style of drawing:)
Ok so i went ahead and added the shoe with some shading to the character.
What's he holding on to????
His shoe looks kinda rock-like from far away. Make it more shoe-like, and you're set.
the character reminds me a lot of the animation for Gorillaz film clips.
But yeah with a little bit of work, its be awesome.
Way too many colors. Re-draw it in a vector program like Illustrator or Flash with only 5.
I do enjoy the model.
thanks for the crit :)
il have a new version up some time today !
Decent idea. It would definitely appeal to the crowd that wears cartoony type shirts. Less colors, clean it up a bit.
can i ask, how do you mean clean it up :)
Well first of all you have to fix the arm waving motion. That is unprintable, or will print poorly. Same with the shoe falling. This is hard for me to critique because it's really not my thing at all.
I guess do that and use the right amount of colors and we can take it from there.
ahh i get you now :)
thanks alot !