The Adventures of Sunflowerman

  • by Mike23334
  • posted Apr 09, 2007
  • 7 Comments

Hey sorry about the multiple submissions, but I finally figured out the Critique thing. This would be my first submission, tell me how it is. Thanks.

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Mike23334

Hey sorry about the multiple submissions, but I finally figured out the Critique thing. This would be my first submission, tell me how it is. Thanks.

Fauxpunk

Uhh Not a great concept

llamafacemoopoo

like the idea. i understand the "comic book" style but not sure i'd go for it.

skafiend007

The S on his chest in the big version is backwards, no?

Mike23334

Yeah, it is backwards, I just flipped it for the submission so it would look better. On the shirt the S would be correct.

WanderingBert
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I also disagree with Fauxpunk. I like the Idea. Right now it just doesn't feel properly balanced to me. Maybe a subtle background might help.

Captain Critique

he does not come across as captain sunflower - he looks like an orange captain atom holding a flower - put a sunflower ruffle around his neck or something - plus consider a anchor object or background so it is not just floating there
CRITIQUE ER

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