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Masterpeace

Any comments for me to improve further?

Joe Harding

perfeeect for a kid!

CheesecakeBree

Only two major things I would change about this. 1) His face looks a little smushed flat. 2) The shadow bothers me, but I'm not sure why. I would rather see him walking through some grass or on a pathway rather than just a few dirt specks and an odd shadow as if he's on a flat white surface. I hope that makes sense and/or helps. It's a cute design, especially for a kids tee!

Masterpeace

Is the direction of the shadow wrong? hmm....thanks for the comments, i will change on the face part and also draw out the ground. Thanks!

CheesecakeBree

The direction doesn't look wrong. He just looks to me like he should be walking outside, like through the woods or something. That shadow makes it look like he's walking on a sidewalk or street. If that's what you're going for, then cool... but to me he looks like a little kid on an adventure in a natural area. A shadow probably wouldn't look flat like that if he were walking in grass or something.

CheesecakeBree

I like the colors, by the way.

Masterpeace

ok i get it thanks for the cool comments!

Masterpeace

this is the new changes! pls comments!

lunchboxbrain

great color palette. sub it!

SandySan

Ilike it would buy it

Masterpeace

thanks! i just send it!

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